Thanks for the feedback.
I was worried it would turn out that way.
But good to know where to set the bar for quality.
There are several stories sitting around on my cpu, but they are all this way. Short and to the point. I don't know if I will find the time to "lengthen" them by adding in descriptions if I feel the story is already complete.
Probably a question of the individual writing style.
But I'll think about it