Tom is the least likeable character both in story and in real life I have ever heard of. I really like the story but at some point I would call the police, Tom could never convince the police that you just made all of that up for no reason. I am just thinking realistically, but anyway, definitely keep writing. It is really good.
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I am really shy but I am an exhibitionist.
I just joined so I can't even think of what to do with my signature.
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