This story is very poorly written. You have horrible spelling & punctuation. Based on that and all of your little emoticons throughout the story it seems like you're just trying to make sure everyone knows about your great night.
However, you do seem to have a good story. You just improve your writing skills.
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Here we go; Cool people use a ;; Duh! 
Likes: Candy.
Dislikes: You.
Limits: ' You have to cause I say so'
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