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Originally Posted by mercyou
It is a great story and he chooses to take him time which is a good thing
If you can't offer constructive critisism why offer critisism at all?
And it is actually very very hard to write a story especially one as good as this.
i have written one story (with alot of help from others)
and i can't finish my second one so i am not posting it
Why don't you try and write a story then slave456?
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well he says if you read it that the next part is just on a diffrent computer so it dosent take like 2 weeks 2 transfer from 1 pc to another!!!!