Just got to say that so far i am loving the story so far 
The length of the chapters, brilliant, the use of complicated language to give a better description, brilliant, the use of real life problems to make the reader feel more sympathetic towards the character, brilliant !
So yeah, there are a few mistakes that have been pointed out but MEH noone's perfect.
Looking forward to the next chapter 
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[20:16:43] Jameser: ‹@J.M.N› don't worry you're definitely one of the lads here
[22:05:21] 1Pupil: Best moderator of getDare to me
One day when the light is glowing
I’ll be in my castle golden
But until the gates are open
I just wanna feel this moment
"Bdsm. That's were u get spanked!"
I love weiners and nuts.
"JMN is the one that most the tweenagers want to see in a kilt"
Last edited by J.M.N; 11-03-2011 at 08:33 AM.
Reason: punctuation mistake >.<
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