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Aethi · 10-31-2011, 12:24 PM

Hah, thanks for pointing that out. I didn't mean to use the past perfect form. xD I'll fix that and any other grammatical errors I see. The correct use would be a past progressive, i.e., "Their parents were taking them to New York." Anyway, I'll shut up and work on that new chapter.

10-31-2011, 12:24 PM	#11
Aethi getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Indiana, USA Posts: 255 Blog Entries: 1	Hah, thanks for pointing that out. I didn't mean to use the past perfect form. xD I'll fix that and any other grammatical errors I see. The correct use would be a past progressive, i.e., "Their parents were taking them to New York." Anyway, I'll shut up and work on that new chapter. __________________ M/22/Gay LIKES: Clothing (not xdress) \| Video Game Dares \| Shower Dares \| Sleeping Dares DISLIKES: Messy \| Piss \| Outside/semi-public LIMITS: Involving other people \| Scat \| \| Crossdressing \| Blood \| Etc.