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Old 05-16-2024, 11:33 AM   #188
MidnighMustang
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Hi all - this is my first post on here... and my first attempt at a story ever, so please bear with me and all feedback is greatly appreciated. I've got some good ideas where this story is heading, and the second part should be here real soon...
Sweet story! I googled for exactly this kind of story & was VERY happy to find yours. I hope you will do the sequel; I'll definitely read it.

A great read from start to finish (I was lucky enough to have the full story in front of me, from Part I to Epilogue, so no waiting between Parts)

I'm hooked. I wasn't sure about joining a new site, but you've sold this site for me, all by yourself. I concur with another who commented it was an extra pleasure to read an amateur story without spelling/grammar errors to detract from being immersed in it.

Have you written others, of any kind/genre?
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