Okay....that was an amazing chapter but I am going to be a bit critical of it because...I feel like it. I thought it brushed past some stuff ALOT like the feelings that have been building up, the setting at home, the sister and dinner and a few other factors. I will tell you more on MSN. It was still a great update though. Second complaint, why the f$#k did you not tell me this was uploaded....I love your story and cant belive that I didnt read it the second you posted it.
Finally, The chapter was a bit long.....but every so often a long chapter is really nice
Great work dude (talk in MSN)
