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Originally Posted by Saphir
Hey,
I really like your writing! I hope I can read more soon.  Spanking isn't my thing usually, but I think it's a very cool way to start this story. Rather special, but cool.:3
I noticed one little mistake: "It took only a minute or slow of slow stroking up and down"
You have a nice, descriptive language. Nothing to complain about so far.
Have a nice day!
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oops! thank you kindly for the note; that has been fixed. and yeah, this isn't quite going to be wholly spanking-centric. you'll see a variety of situations over time. this was just the most naturalistic of the starting scenarios I had in mind.