Thread: Fiction: Adventure Abroad [MxM]
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Old 09-12-2011, 01:38 PM   #22
Saphir
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Thank you for all the nice comments, I love you! :3

The bottle caps were quite a tricky thing, yep C.K., that's why. I actually had to investigate what they look like, if you rather find twist offs or pry offs in US and so on, to be sure that what I'm writing makes any sense at all. Because I have never seen a twist off crown cap in my life.
Alex, I totally agree. I Don't get why they need that either...

If anybody finds logical errors in my story, or just something what sounds strange to them, please ask/annote it, so I know. :P

I've sadly never been to the US (nor to any other English country ) so I can't know everything. :P

I'm afraid, I havn't started writing the next chapter yet. I will hopefully find some time on wednesday or thursday, so it would be spellchecked and released on Friday... otherwise I have to do it on the weekend. :P School keeps me busy. :/

I'm always happy about your comments. So write one and quit the lurking. ;D

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