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Old 03-03-2008, 05:31 PM   #1
johnsalach
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Default Sarah's Party [FICTION, CAUTION]

This was written many many years ago by myself when I was still finding my limits. I posted years later and it doesn't make easy reading.

Apologies, but it is sort of in the TorD genre. If what a little distasteful and very poorly written.

I was around 14 when I wrote it and it was for someone I knew whose knickers I kind of wanted to be in. So it meant more to her than it did to me or anyone else.

Anyway, here is it is.....

Before I can begin, I must introduce you to the people who I spent one
of the most extraordinary nights of my life with. Sophie was my
ex-girlfriend and was around 5 ft 11 in in height. She had a brown
shoulder length hair and averagely proportioned breasts. A tease by
nature, she spent four months teasing me with provacative sexy clothes
before we finally slept together (We were 15 at the time!). Two years on,
I do not spend much time with her, despite her stunning looks. Louise was
the second female member of the group. A firey and sometimes
confrontational girl, who spent most of her time playing rugby and
football. I have spent many times jerking over (mentally not physically)
her fantastic body. Her blonde hair was short. Her breasts were large.
Her legs were smooth and perfect and her hands were perfectly formed. The
perfect woman. Andrew was another footballer. A small, pint sized centre
forward with a reputation for being successful with the girls. His also
had a gift for scoring spectacular goals. The chant "Nayim from the
halfway line" could easily be adapted for Andy. He was quite short - only
5 ft 7 inches, but did alot of sport and kept his body in perfect
condition. Daniel wasn't a footballer, or indeed a sportsman, but spent
most of his spare time working for extra money or using his computer. Not
that he was a sad bastard. I was good friends with Dan and we shared a
common hobby - Computers. He was tall - taller than me at over 6ft.
Lastly there was me - William - or Will as I was known. I was a keen
footballer and captained the C Team at my local college. That is how I met
Andy three years ago. I am tall - around 6 ft and have short brown hair. I
play alot of football, so I also have strong legs with large
muscles,although my upper body strength is poor. I have never had a lot of
girlfriends - only three since I was 14. I dont make a secret of this.

It was Sarahs birthday. She was 17 and lived on the outskirts of the
town and her family had a large house with an even bigger garden. It was a
warm Friday night. Hot almost and I decided to wear blue shorts with a red
T-Shirt (this was the colours of my football team). Tartan boxer shorts -
as I am part-Scottish. I arrived half-an-hour early with my present (Gold
necklace) but went around the corner to see Sophie. I enjoyed Sarahs
company, but I got a weird feeling inside me when I was around her and she
made me nervous. I didn't want to be the only guy in her company as that
would just about kill me. Somehow Sophie seemed the lesser of the two
evils. She opened the door. "Good Evening", she said and held open the
door. I was unsure whether to come in as she hadn't invited me. I just
stood there and said that she looked nice.

"Aren't you coming in then?", came the response. I entered the hall,
decorated in pale blue. Long time since I'd seen this. I heard the door
close.

"I just popped round to see how you were before I went to Sarahs party.
Long time no see". Sophie walked through to the kitchen, and judging by
the silence in the house. I guessed that her family was out. This was
confirmed with my next statement,

"Very quiet, what have you done with your family?" Sophie went to the
fridge and poured herself some orange juice, offering me some in the
process, which I declined.

"They've gone on a long weekend break to Devon."

For the non-UK readers among us, Devon is one of the nicest parts of the
country, offering clean and safe beaches and excellent cuisine.

"Nice. Cream teas and all that?" Cream Teas is a delicacy from Devon
and Sophie nodded in answer to my question. There was a silence. A pause
of around five seconds. We both waited for each other to say something.
This was partly caused by me not having a reason for calling on Sophie. I
interrupted the silence,

"Oh, Ive found that album that you lost"

"What album?", came the reply.

"Whats the Story Morning Glory, I think its yours. I vaguely remember
borrowing it off you, shortly before we split up"

"Oh thats where it went."

"You did lend it to me". I thought I better remind her of this fact.

"For the weekend, two years ago"

"I'm sorry. I will let you have it back. I'll bring it in on Monday"

"You better"

I thought I better change the subject as Sophie was beginning to worry
me. I am never sure if shes serious or not, so didnt know if she was angry
with me or not.

"What have you got Sarah? I bought her a gold necklace from the
jewellers in town"

I passed the box over which contained the necklace with in. Sophie
opened the box.

"Unwrapped presents, as usual." A small grin came over my face and then
she continued "Nice. You never got me anything like this."

"Yes I did. Sixteenth birthday. Tri colour gold bracelet"

The bracelet in question used three strands of metal interweeved - Red
Gold, 24 carat gold and White Gold.

"That cost me more money, than this."

"Thanks" came the reply. "Do you know Andrew?"

I knew Andrew from football training quite well, but I was puzzled by
this weird question out-of-the-blue.

"Only from footy. Why?"

"I kinda fancy him. What do you know about him?"

"Not that much. He's a good footballer. Scores quite a lot.". (This
was goals as well as girls!)

"Leyton Orient supporter".

Only the UK readers will realise the significance of this as Leyton
Orient are quite possibly the worst football team in the history of
mankind.

"Will he be at the party?"

"I expect so. Sarah used to spend a lot of time with him. Don't know
if she still does" Sophie then squealed.

"I promised Sarah, I'd help her with the drinks before everyone arrives.
Come on, lets go!"

Sophie got up and I picked up the necklace and followed my ex out of the
room. There was to be no escape. I would have to face Sarah for a whole
twenty minutes before reinforcements. Punishment indeed. I stood on the
front lawn while Sophie locked up the house. She appeared thity seconds
later and locked the front door. It was then that I realised what a nice
dress she was wearing. It moulded to her figure excellently and the cloth
was like silk. Almost shiny. She turned around and walked down the steps
and I saw the front. The cyan blue material was cut to allow some cleveage
to be visible but wasnt explicit or too provacative.

We arrived at the venue early. Sarah was there and greeted us. She
wore a light green top, which showed of her curves excellently and short,
very short, denim shorts.

"Happy Birthday" I said and held my gift aloft. The birthday girl
thanked me.

"You two an item again" Instaneously, Sophie and I both responded in the
negative.

"Can't keep secrets from me!"

"Oh yes I can", I replied.

"Now you are here, can you go and help Danny with the drinks in the
garden."

We walked over to where Dan stood on the patio behind a tabl emptying
boxes of beer bottles onto the table. No sooner had we arrived than Sophie
was called away to the other side of the garden.

"Why are you here? I didnt know that you knew Sophie."

"I dont really"

"Then why are you here"

"Blackmail" I chuckled.

"What?"

"She's got something over me, which I dont really want brandished about"

"What?"

"You dont want to know"

This was a bit stupid because I clearly did want to know.

"Yes I do, now tell. You knew about what Anna and I did and who caught
us so even it up a bit"

This was a rather embarrassing tale of two summers ago when Anna, who I
had been going out with for a while. One night, we felt a bit horny and
started to give each other a quick service, in the woods at the back of
Anna's house, before her parents arrived back with the barbeque. My
fun-loving Biology teacher "caught" us, which was very embarrassing. He
didnt say very much, and just kept walking the dog. The next lesson we had
with him was Sex Education, which is on the Biology Course. I nearly died.
He started with "Some of you will know about this already" and looked at
me. Anna and I split up shortly afterwards. I made sure he knew! Dan
lowered his voice, even though there was noone in the vicinity who could
hear a word of what we were saying"

"After college one day she saw me accessing a certain internet site,
which I dont want people to know about"

I know about Dan's habit of accessing adult material on the web and we
sometimes share sites. He however spends too much time on these sites and
has home-made CDs full of downloaded material.

"Let me guess giantknockers.com?" I said trying not to laugh.

"Doesnt matter which one, but she saw me on it."

"Bit stupid doing it at college"
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