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Old 09-02-2011, 06:22 PM   #1
darebunny22
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Right whoever reads this it's my first story so here goes give me feedback please
Chapter 1
I bounded up to Snowy's stable, pulled open the door and saw the young mare lay gracefully on the hay. I ran over and stroked her pure white head; she flickered one brown eye lazily. "Come on Snowy, let's go for a ride" I whispered soothingly in her white ear. I bustled round getting the pink diamond tack (saddle reins etc), my mind bursting with what had just happened. My heart fluttered and my deep blue eyes saw the events playing over again and again.

As we cantered through the forest I inhaled the beautiful smells, delicate bluebells, fragrant oak. I patted Snowy's soft chocolate mane... I was distracted usually I paid as much attention to riding as I could but today I wanted to finish as quick as possible!

What had happened before?
Why did she want riding to stop?
Can we find out more about this person?

Find out in the next installment of Secret Love
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