Thread: Fiction: Cousin T or D Game
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Old 07-26-2011, 10:23 AM   #130
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Originally Posted by Memories for Life View Post
Something happen to you over the past week, italia13calcio? This chapter seemed a bit rushed and just didn't have any sense of panache' like your other chapters have had. It could be the calm before the storm -- the final "confrontation" between James and Lola! The loser may regret any actions they may have caused the other during the course of the game.

I guess we'll wait until next week, if history holds to pattern!
i loved it so just be quite. if u want 'panache' go write ur own story

Rachie Edit
Stop bickering, and please be nice children

Last edited by Rachie; 07-26-2011 at 12:59 PM.
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