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Old 06-20-2011, 11:07 PM   #17
nuditydudity
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I really like this story. I am a little confused about what happened to George back on the journey between locker room and dorm, but apart from that, I think that this is a well written, excellently paced, incredibly awesome story!
Way to go! : )
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