Nice new chapter. I think that this is a great story, and I know it's tempting to get right into the more 'exciting parts' of the story really quickly, but make sure that you do not rush too much. We will like the 'exciting parts' more if we care about the characters more!
Great job so far, keep it up man!
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9 Years on getDare!!
Sing like you know the lyrics
Dance like no one is watching
Live like you were dying
Love like you've never been hurt before
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