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EB32 · 06-08-2011, 07:39 PM

Poor form. No exposition. No attention to grammar. Could have had potential as a story if you were more careful about your approach.

06-08-2011, 07:39 PM	#5
EB32 Member Join Date: Feb 2011 Posts: 49	Poor form. No exposition. No attention to grammar. Could have had potential as a story if you were more careful about your approach.