05-09-2011, 01:18 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: USA
Posts: 204
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Algight, you've got a good start with a classic setup that's been done on here many times. Two guys, two boners, and soon a game of TorD. Please try and make it original! I like that you give a lot of description and i can tell you can be a very good author but you've gotta make it different from all of the other stories on here. Also, paragraphs would be nice :P
I am interested to see where it goes.
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