[hot_viper_2005]

I just read your old story. It is quite good. The Island and Hunger Games all mixed together.

I am a little disappointed that she will forever be without memories. I wanted to see her getting some memories back about Kate. I need her to be able to have a path to get revenge. I want the male/dad in the dream to get fleshed out and punished. I want the Mom to either get her comeuppance and be punished for allowing it to happen or get allowed in on it and help getting revenge. There needs to be a President Snow that is running the evil world of sex trafficking in society. Those buying the services need to pay for their evil. The system needs to fall apart and be exposed.

I like good non-consensual fantasy, but this one seemed like it could have book 2 finding the bad guys and a book 3 women tearing down the system taking over (CFNM and Femdom.) We never hear the male story so the first book could have two story lines of the things the males have to go through and then the two males and two females could work together in book 2 until they find the underground militia that is fighting the system. So may places to go. But I do love Ruby being the Katniss of the story.