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Old 05-18-2021, 11:24 AM   #2
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I am a frequent reader at getdare.com and am trying out writing for a change. Any feedback would be appreciated. The first chapter is just the introductions.

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Chapter 1:-

I(Alex) was studying for my finals in my room as the last rays of the sun disappeared below the horizon. Actually being able to watch the sunset was one of the many advantages of living in the countryside. While I was reading, my mind was wandering to the future. Tomorrow, I would finally be done with school and would finally be able to enjoy a few months of free time.

I had rarely spent anytime outside my house in the last three years, unless it was to visit one of my few friends. I was at the top of my class but had to sacrifice a lot of my social life to achieve that. I had never been in a serious relationship and had never gone past kissing with a girl. Being an introvert, I did not have much luck making a lot of friends but I was content with the small group of friends that I did have.

We had planned to meet up tomorrow at my house and have a mini party of sorts to celebrate the end of exams. My parents and my sister were going out for the weekend and thus I would have the house to myself. This, along with the relative privacy offered by the remote location of my house was the prime reason why it was selected for our gathering.

While I was lost in my thoughts, I heard my mother calling me down for dinner. I received a barrage of instructions for the following three days, with the usual - water the plants, lock the doors properly, don't make a mess in the house etc. I was technically an adult(had my eighteenth birthday three months ago) and could easily manage the house for three days, but that did not stop them from listing down these instructions. They left at 10PM and after another hour of studying, I went to sleep, looking forward to tomorrow.

The exam went smoothly and was really happy about that. We had agreed to meet after lunch at 3PM, so in the meantime, I had reheated pizza for lunch and cleaned my room.
The first to arrive were Blake and Steven. Blake was a year younger than me but was almost half a foot taller. He was a good looking guy with a well built body. He was a part of the school football team. Steven(18) on the other hand, was similar to my build.

They were followed shortly by the three girls - Sarah, Tiffany and Beth. Beth and Tiffany had both recently turned 19 and were a part of the cheerleading squad, while Sarah was 18. I might be a bit biased as I had a crush on Sarah, but she was the prettiest of the three. I had not had the courage to ask her out yet, but hoped to do so soon.

We talked for a couple of hours and played a few video games for a while. We were soon feeling bored when Steven suggested that we play truth or dare.

"Come on, we are all adults. Only stupid, young people play that.", said Beth.
Steven said, "We can spice things up with a forfeit for the loser, and it will be more fun as an adult. Back me up on this guys!"

After a bit of back and forth, Blake suggested that for the forfeit, two losers(one from each gender) will have to obey all orders from the four winners for a month. All five agreed to this proposal and asked me, "What about you, Alex?"

I was really nervous as the game could go pretty wild from past experiences, but also felt a bit of excitement from the prospect. After a few seconds, I nodded.
"Great! We will decide some rules and limits for the game and then let's start!", said Steven.
Good intro but will able to tell after reading at least 3 parts more..Man take your time..

I too started a story but because I didn't get much response from the users I dropped it from this and posted it somewhere else...
I hope this doesn't happen with you...
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