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Originally Posted by CountNihil
(it's called literary license.)
... meant as a teaser to see whether there was an interest in the story or not. the next one will be shorter because it is really the ending to this one (a cliffhanger if you like)
(and no i don't want to turn this into a debate on literary license or correct grammar)
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I quite like the literary license you have taken. And I quite enjoy the opening and look forward to reading more.. great start.