Hmm, not to be a doucher, but I prefer your other story. Your writing is just as good here, but the content doesn't really interest me. But still, keep writing, I suspect that a lot of people will enjoy it.
Edit: Oh, and in my opinion, the sister should make an appearance, then I feel like this story would appeal to a wider audience, and more importantly, appeal to me. :P
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Likes:
Light to moderate pain - Giving dares - Asking questions
Dislikes:
Hard pain - Jacking off - Semi-public - Wedgies
Hates:
Extreme pain - Urine - Full Public - Involving other people
Limits (Will never do these)
Permanent damage - Involving Family - Scat - Involving Animals - Crossdressing - Eating Gross stuff
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