[molten man]

Originally Posted by sum1(2)

See the problem i had with the post you gave was it just basically said, in more words, dude this suxxx. I was going to leave just the link, but then gota bit narked at your attitude.
If you think you give frank and honest opinions please continue to do so, just make sure you give reasons in other words keep things constructive. As an honest opinion alone isn't enough to help someone improve, you need to point out where they're going wrong, otherwise it's just you're purely subjective view with no backing on the item in question.
The review you gave just above, i would to be honest agree with (apart from the last sentence which could almost be a personal attack on admireu4ever.) Would have been nice if you'd said that first off though.
I would argue on the structure on mine but that's your opinion (and the first post was by a different author) The level of detail was to try to create a psychological justification to the characters actions.

I would second that!! Criticism should be constructive