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Originally Posted by interesting
Sigh.
Incest. Mature theme. R-18.
Sorry to be a party-pooper.
Also it would be appreciated if you could write punctuation into your sentences it would greatly help the reading and people would probably enjoy it more I dont mind the content of the text because those stories can still be erotic but the theme is definetely too mature to be posted in only truth or dare stories it needs to be in the mature section so it should be moved there so apologies again but I have to point it out you could also do paragraphs and even using quotation for the dialogue but thats just my opinion all in all if you can keep writing it keep going and improve yourself and the presentation and the story and this might be interesting thank you
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