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Old 06-04-2010, 04:39 PM   #10
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Im going to be very honest here so brace yourself.

Ive always hated it when writers describe whats happening in brackets. Which leads to my question, why did I like your story so much!?
I loved your humor you use, its rare I laugh at stories, but I laughed at yours.
So many people make grammer mistakes on here like teh instead of the, but you, made me waste my time looking for grammer errors because there arent any!

Before today, I wouldve easily said I have never read a perfect story on here in my 2 years. But, dammit, because of you, soon I wont be able to say that.

So, all I can say is, Thanks for writing this story.
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