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Originally Posted by BigBadWolfy
Finally up to date on the story, i quite like it but it feels like its lost focus from what it was aiming for at the beginning, however it is still an interesting thing to read
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Hi BigBadWolfy,
Yes you are quite right I did lose my focus, the story got out of control and to me wasn't making any sense. I had so many interruptions and things going on in my life that in the end I stopped altogether. its like playing a gig and knowing you have to jam a number but the jam goes off the rails and becomes a mess and rather than stop everyone has to work hard to pull it back again.
I think the only way I will get this back is to re-read it and see where i was heading.
So would you tell me what you liked and where you felt it got lost.
in the meantime there is a 3 part story coming up called Casey.
cheers J5o