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Old 05-31-2017, 11:59 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by pee games View Post
Since you're looking for feedback,

-What size are the glasses?
-10-15 glasses is waaaay too much to drink at once, unless you're using shot glasses
-A human adult can only process about 2 pints (4 cups) an hour maximum, less if you have a small build.
-If you're not using shot glasses, you're facing water intoxication by drinking that much so quickly. Anyone doing this dare is more likely to throw up than to pee themselves.
-I don't understand what the purpose of step E is, maybe make it a bit clearer.

I mean for this advice to be constructive, not trying to shoot you down. Thanks for reading.
I appreciate the criticism, thank you for being constructive. I will certainly change it, when I get the chance. I appreciate it!
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