Thank you sir sam.
I just added a paragraph above trying to explain how I felt at the end. I simply could not write it when I wrote the rest,the story was too raw in my mind. It was a little bit easier now.
It is unfortunate that my style does not allow your usual form of response - I just had to dump it this way. It was the best I could do to share the feeling (easy to describe the physical) of being and doing. At least you found it an exciting read - thank you!
Last edited by MarvHarvey; 04-12-2017 at 09:11 PM.
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