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Old 04-12-2010, 06:37 PM   #6
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"Okay i'm here Ali Ali are you there?" Jake said this once more when Ali came up right behinde him and said,"Yes Jake i'm here" after Ali welcomed Jake in she said,"Okay you ready for our game?" Jake just nodded his head.Then Ali went in her garage and brought back a soccer ball,with 2 mini goals."Okay Jakey boy heres the game." "soccer?" "yes soccer" "well then lets get things started!!".They both agreed on playing up to 5 points.During the first round Jake made not 1 but 2!! swift goals.When Jake got cocky Ali started getting goals even faster!! the score was already 4 (Ali) 2(Jake).Just when Ali went for the last goal Jake started playing better,faster,and even harder then before!!! he made 2 more quick shots,and Ali stole the ball from him.Then she ran at full speed down the field Jake thought it was over when he got a suden burst of adrenalin!!! Even thought Ali was faster then Jake at that moment he was even faster then her!! as he ran with great speed he got the ball.With vigores speed he ran back down the field then he made the shot in the left hand corner!! He started cheering as Ali said,"WOW Jake that was some game." then right before Jake could thank her she kissed him after like 3 minutes Jake exclaimed,"HEY ALI GUSSE WHAT!!! your gonna be my slave!!" Ali stood there in amazment,"how how how did you gusse that was what I was gonna make you do?" "I gussed because well ummmm i didn't really.....".So after an hour of them going back and forth Jake said,"hey Ali do do you wanna go out with me?"

Okay guys agian tell me how you think i did and Ali is short for Alison.Also feel free to give some negitive comments.
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