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Originally Posted by n25n0598
I'm sorry but I can't read this story if your posts are going to have such bad grammar. I counted 10 mistakes in the first sentence alone. Run your posts through Microsoft Word, edit them, then post what you've written. The storyline has the potential to be good, but this simply doesn't matter if people can't read the posts.
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Ok i tried to find all my mistakes as you said.Please reread the story and comment on it now.
