I'm sorry but I can't read this story if your posts are going to have such bad grammar. I counted 10 mistakes in the first sentence alone. Run your posts through Microsoft Word, edit them, then post what you've written. The storyline has the potential to be good, but this simply doesn't matter if people can't read the posts.
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Likes: small pain, semi-public, small risk, masturbation, bondage
Ok: ice, medium pain, wedgies, messy, naked, anal
Limits: extreme pain, poo, involving others (unless they don't know about it), family, pictures, blood, permanent, cross-dressingand diapers (don't have any)
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