Hey so this is my first published story and am not sure if this one is worth continuing so please comment on how it is. It has kinda a slow start so please bear with it and wait till like the end of chapter 2 when things start happening. I have already wrote like four and a half chapters but after that it might take me a while to write it. Enjoy, please use only constructive criticism, and remember this is fiction and that I don't intend anything wrong purely by writing this story. Ok cool. I'll shut up now. Read it.
Intimate Sleepover
Truth or Dare Birthday Sleepover
Key:
Mia: A tall and cute but undeveloped white girl with medium length black hair. She is just turning thirteen and recently started wearing a AA bra.
Yvonne: Mia’s best friend. She is a short white girl who is still twelve and wears a training bra and sports clothes. She is very quiet and has shoulder length brown hair and glasses.
Colette: The eldest and most developed of the friend group. Tall, white, and blonde, she wears a C sized bra and knows the most about sex. She has been thirteen for at least five months, and has a relationship going with a boy in their grade.
Aya: Aya is a careless Jewish girl of average height, whose medium length hair is often down in a frizzy mess. She has braces and is very outgoing. Proud of her AA bra, she is twelve and doesn’t know much about sex or have many dirty thoughts, unlike most other girls in her grade.
Alex: The shortest of all the girls. She is a perverted twelve year old girl, and has very long black hair. Her bra size is A, and she boasts the nicest ass of all the girls.
Pariya: A relatively short girl with fluffy and big medium length black hair. Her skin is a darker tanned color. As she is thirteen and the second oldest of her friends, her bra size is B. She is also kind of a tomboy, as she enjoys videogames and action more than most girls.
Ryan: Mia’s ten year old brother, has a soccer tournament.
Chapter One
Mia
The large cabinet lay before her, filled with almost every type and color of clothing one could imagine. Mia came from a rich and conservative family, as her mother works as a surgeon, and her father a computer engineer for Apple. She slowly sat down on her bed, after unwrapping her towel from her petite body. She slumped forward and cupped her hands around her cheeks.
Mia felt a mix of excitement, anxiety, and fear. She was finally turning thirteen- and was about to take on a new life. Her Mom would always tell her, once she was a teenager, everything would start to change. She looked down at her budding breasts. Imagining what they might look like in a couple months, she stood up and smoothed her bed sheets as she wandered back to the wooden dresser.
Squatting, Mia pulled the bottom drawer open. Folded neatly on the right side were stacks of different colored panties. They were all classic briefs- plain and the same type, providing a cloth rainbow streaking down the dresser. She pulled out an sky blue pair and put it on, straitening out both the front and back to avoid wedgies.
She pulled her medium-length straight black hair behind her ears, and shifted to the left side where her bras were. There was a mix of black, white, and beige A cup bras, in a similar pattern to their accompaniments on the other side of the drawer. After fastening a black t-shirt style bra around her chest, she pulled a pair of white socks over her feet. She heard a knock at the door, and shouted “Just a minute…”
“You’d better hurry up!” Came the reply from her Mom. “Guests could be here any minute!”
“Ok Mom… I’m almost done.” Mia retorted, gritting her teeth. Shaking off any doubt, she picked up her pace as she opened her top drawer and pulled out a pair of black yoga pants and a blue t-shirt with a heart design across the front. She slipped them on and opened her door. Checking the time, she wandered across the hall and into the bathroom.
Kicking her ten year old brother, Ryan, out of the room, she put on a touch of lipstick and eye shadow. After brushing her hair and making sure it fell over her shoulders the way she liked it, she came downstairs.
Her brother was on a highly competitive soccer club team, that traveled all around the nation. His team had made it to the finals, and the game was the same weekend as Mia’s birthday. Her parents came to the conclusion that her dad would stay behind.
Therefore, her mom and brother were waiting until the party had started to leave. Ryan was playing a game on his PS4, which frankly, to Mia, was much to violent for her to care about it. Her Mom was just finishing small things for the party while her dad was in his office working.
It wasn’t for a couple of minutes- which, to Mia, seemed like hours, until the doorbell rang. As she rushed to the door, she saw Yvonne through the window. Yvonne was her best friend, and usually came early to Mia’s parties. After just sitting down and beginning a conversation, the doorbell went off again, indicating Alex had arrived. She welcomed the new arrival in and they stood at the door talking between the three of them.
After a minute or two, they heard a loud knock, and both Aya and Pariya came in. With Colette being the only remaining person, they started to play a card game. But it wasn’t long before Mia’s phone buzzed, and she looked down to see that Colette would be about thirty minutes late. Mia then went and told her mother “Hey Mom Colette is gonna be about a half hour late- I think you guys can head out.”
Ryan and Mia’s mother then said their goodbyes to everyone, and left the house. Mia caught a glance of Ryan’s longing stare at her guests, no doubt wishing he could stay and enjoy their company. Once everybody had settled in, the girls sang Mia happy birthday, and finished it of with dunking Mia in a bowl of popcorn.