Thread: Fiction: Weekend In The Woods
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Old 11-02-2009, 03:53 PM   #25
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Rob, not having a go, but I made the same mistake.. its not always the comments that count..

Also, a slight error in one of your posts above...

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She stood there and reached to her back and undid the clasps. As, she did the straps fell to her sides. Moving her hands back to the front of her bra, she slid the straps down her arms, letting her large round boobs fall gently back against her chest. Next to go was her bra; she hooked her thumbs into the thin band of fabric that held the thong together
Shouldn't that be thong, as she just removed her bra??

Last edited by haxial; 11-02-2009 at 03:54 PM. Reason: made mistake more visible
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