The very best story on this site mate, you must keep going; NO DOUBT! 
I humbly recommend you to add some edging and tease and denial elements to the story, also I think lots of the admirers of the story would love it!
I also would love some mild pain for his balls, because edging/t&d/mild pain for balls are very compatible with your "humiliation" concept throughout the story 
Thanks again! Please keep up your brilliant work!
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24/M
6'1"/150 lbs
Cock Size: 6.7 Inches
Likes: Belly Punches, Tease & Denial, CBT/Ballbusting, JOI, Edging, Orgasm Denial, Dice Dares and of course RUINED ORGASMS!..
Dislikes (but will-do as Punishments): Long Term Denial, No Touching, Post Orgasm Torture..
Hates (never-do): Anal, family, friends, blood, crossdressing, feet, cum eating, pee-drinking..
I AM A RUINEDORGASM-O-HOLIC!
Every PM I get "EDGE", I must edge twice! Dare you to make me edge!
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