Thread: Fiction: Miss Queen of Whores
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Old 02-19-2015, 08:52 AM   #5
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I'm sure it'll be edited, so just for the record, here's the original.

As SecretlyAngelic said, it's got bad spelling, poor punctuation and grammar and, yes, it is indeed boring.

You tell her, Fluby.

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Originally Posted by Demon girl View Post
Miss Queen of Whores: part 1 (MORE TO BE POSTED TOMORROW)
A very nice young lady was walking along side a small stream one night, she was on her own, but expected she would be fine, and if not so, she thought she could handle things herself, with a pleasant conversation. Although, she would soon find that not only will she not be fine, but not even a pleasant conversation is to be an option. Not to long ago, 3 days maybe, she had gotten into some trouble with her friends, she had been at a bar, and gotten drunk, she found herself giving a blowjob to some man she had not even laid eyes on before, which led to her letting them play with her boobs. Anyway back to the story. The young girl began to feel as if someone were watching or following her. She stopped for a moment, and heard 1 footstep crunching leaves, and breaking a twig. So the girl turned around and said politely, in a British accent, "Hello, who is there? It's all right, you can trust me..... I won't hurt you." She waited a moment, but recieved no response. So she thought it was just a deer, or rabbit, maybe a squirrel or a bird even, as it wasn't extremely late. She was right, it was an animal, only, it was not what she had hoped. No sooner had she turned around, she saw a large dog standing infront of over, she was almost face to face with it she heard a growl behind her, and slowly turned her head, in the corner of her eye she saw another, and she slowly looked to her right and left, she was surrounded. Next she heard 5 horses walking her way, each 1 had someone riding it. The one infront had a golden saddle, and a leather bridle with beutiful jewels on it, the ridder, was a female, who looked much younger than she truly was. The girl had on shoes with jewles and gold on them. She wore a bra and thong, the bra being lined with diamonds, and she wore sluty thigh high stockings. The lady on the horse looked at her and said quietly, but so all there could hear, "Hello, Emily, you've been very naughty....... gentlemen take her and lock her up, so that she can have a trial later. Oh, and treat her kindly, shes a beutiful girl, I'd hate for her to be harmed."

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