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Originally Posted by Demon girl
I looked over this and there is not even ONE spelling error. This story is not complete, and is not yet at the interesting part, so if all you want to do is bitch and complain, like a child go right ahead.
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jewles is spelt JEWELS!
beutiful is spelt BEAUTIFUL
ridder is spelt RIDER
SHOULD I GO ON?
And don't talk to SecretlyAngelic like that. She's only trying to help!