I do need to very quickly comment on my last installment. First off, I want to personnally thank will9022 and theJudge for their comments.
The reason I put an end to the events of that night was that from my main character's POV, things had gone too far. I would have enjoyed writing more for that night, and I had a ton of ideas, but it needed to end there for that night.
But rest assured - it's not over yet. Not by a long shot.
Frank did have sex with Laurie. And Sandra's presence in the mix may be more than for a single night. And Danielle still looms above it all. And don't forget about Rita and Jacques, now living in Montreal - Rita did say she might be dropping a line to Frank. So once our 'hero' recovers from his ordeal, and accepts the events of that Saturday night, he should be able to move on.
So many ideas... so little time to write them all...