[Valero fantasi]

I want to know if this story caught your attention...
If it was any good? And would you like me to continue writing stories like these?

I am not that good at writing, but I am willing to improve my writing skills.
This is my first story, It just came up in me and I wanted to share it.

But, please.. tell me if it's fun to read or not, otherwise I will just stick to reading other people their fiction.