If anyone is interested in other longer, similar stories I've written including one true story, here are the links
http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=150004
http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=158668
http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=136688
I hope you enjoy these until I get around to writing a new story
