Awesome, i absolutly love your story and i was really enjoying reading it. Please go on
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Originally Posted by Hampers
From that day on, we were always dressed like that. We still loitered around the library, but people didn't seem to notice as much; they assumed we were dressed up as 19th Century poets as some sort of permanent advertising campaign to encourage young people to read more. It also started to effect a change in the way we spoke. No longer would I greet Paul with "Hey, what's up?" but rather "How do you do, sir? And what news of my Lord Buckingham?"
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You made a little mistake there
It should have been
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"How do you do, sir?" And "what news of my Lord Buckingham?"
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Other than that, Awesome!