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Old 02-12-2009, 07:18 AM   #2
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Awesome, i absolutly love your story and i was really enjoying reading it. Please go on

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From that day on, we were always dressed like that. We still loitered around the library, but people didn't seem to notice as much; they assumed we were dressed up as 19th Century poets as some sort of permanent advertising campaign to encourage young people to read more. It also started to effect a change in the way we spoke. No longer would I greet Paul with "Hey, what's up?" but rather "How do you do, sir? And what news of my Lord Buckingham?"
You made a little mistake there

It should have been

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"How do you do, sir?" And "what news of my Lord Buckingham?"
Other than that, Awesome!
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