[lunalove]

I love your story, but I think there was more to be had than the ending you gave, I like the idea of ending it with an open ending, and leaving it to the imagination, however, I would consider perhaps in the future adjusting the ending, as the style of it doesn't quite match up with the rest of your amazing story, well done though, I know being a writer "of sorts" how hard it is to make something that is appreciated by others!