an obedient slave boy
 

Hi guy, this is my first attempt at a story so i would love feedback from you guys about how you think it is, thanks :)

Chapter 1

Matt stared at the clock, 5 minutes until he finished work and was able to go home to his beautiful mistress.As soon as it was time to head home he rushed to his car and sped home ,anxiously awaiting what his mistress had planned for him.He got home fast and made his way to the front door.He made his way to the front door quickly and rang the doorbell.The door opened and he saw his mistress,he could feel his cock getting hard staight away as soon as he saw her, she was tall with long red hair and she had massive boobs,that were nearly exploding out of the black latex dress she was wearing and her knee lenght high heel boots only made his cock harder, Sarah was her name and he worshipped the ground she walked on.He had hoped that she might have been a bit happy to see him but he was wrong."Your late slut"she said as she grabbed a handful of his hair and pulled him inside."Clothes,take them off"she said in a loud angry voice,he did as he was told and stripped down to his underwear, "lose the underwear aswell you stupid slut"!!He did as he was told,not wanting to anger him further."Haha , god every time i see your pathetic dick i cant help but laugh" she laughed ,"do you think that tiny thing would satisfy a woman like me,or any other woman for that matter?Hah its pathetic just like you slave now get on your knees and hands and lck my boots like the dog you are!!He obey his mistress and got down and began to lick her boots clean."I've got a very special night planned for us tonight slave.Matt didnt know wether to be excited or scared of what his mistress had in mind for the evening.....

Hey, it's a good start. Just don't rush it. Take your time and really work through what you want to say until it flows. And proofread! :P I look forward to the next chapter.

Like where this is going... :)

Nice start to the story.