Great story :)
 

love it rachie :) thanks for making your storys :)

I just read the first few parts. I must say I'm intrigued. This John fellow looks like quite the troublemaker. The cliffhangers made it more difficult for me to pull away, so good move there.

Read the story for a second time, simply great keep up the amazing story in the sequel

(just started reading this)
about one of david's puzzles:
if you take the paper and wrap it around a cylinder you can get all the points in one go. this works for any number of rows. check my album for proof.
all in all i love the story.

sooooo true shiny demon is honestly the best story writer on getdare;)also this was a while ago so just deal with it

heres my comment(as promised) quiet nice bit i rather wanted sara to win but a well *grumbles" stupid adam"*

this is awesome rach! i have been meaning to thank you for writing this wonderful story!!! you are the most wonderful writer in the univese!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!! i think its eather adams cock or somthin else... not shure!!!

thomas the train

Just finished reading the first one and have to say it was great. I congratulate you on a job well done.

please do more, I <3 IT :) :) :)

PLEASE FEEL FREE TO READ THE SEQUEL

THERE IS ALREADY 155 PARTS AND ANOTHER 21 HAVE BEEN PRE-TYPED ON IPOD TOUCH FOR THE FOLLOWING DAYS/WEEKS

LOVE RACHIE
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Two sequels now...

Bump to ensure this keeps ready...

Rachie

Thank you for a great story, hope to see the last bit soon