best story ive seen so far keep up the great writing :)

Oh how i wish i was number 5

This was a really good story although I think the forced circumcision part was a little bit much. Had this been a light-hearted story about an innocent and harmless abduction and rape of a minor which would only result in physchological and emotional anguish and scarring which would require years of therapy to alleviate pain of, this would have been a much better story, in my opinion. However, when the boy was also physically and permanently mutilated, I think the story crossed a line.

I think the entire point of it is to be rather harsh. I thoroughly enjoy it though and hope more is coming :D.

It's not meant to be light-hearted, it's supposed to be graphic. By the way, there are no ages mentioned in the entire story so by saying the 'rape of a minor' you're wrong, it's left open for the reader to decide what age they chose to think of the characters as, so that would be your decision.

It's in the Mature Story catagory because it crosses lines.

You can please some of the people, all of the time :rolleyes:

Exactly :) Thank you, there will be more to come.

Some of the most enjoyable things to read are extreme because they are some of the deeper fantasies people have. And while i dont approve of scat it is still very enjoyable writing.

I think this story is great, if you don't appreciate it pm them expressing your opinion. Keep up the writing I'm looking forward tithe next chapter!!

Thank you :) and I'll be putting up the next chapter either today or tomorrow :)

Baldy's Fun
 

Warning: Contains Scat

Some parts of the video was cut out, the boring parts were there was no action. Everything else was aired for everyone to see.

Most of the boys just sat and watched, some of them jacked off and when the part where we had kissed each other with mouthfuls of cum came up, a lot of the boys looked at us with disgust.

'That's all boys, hope you enjoyed it' smiled Baldy, walking to the top of the room and looking straight at me.

All the boys had their chastity cages put back on and all were led from the room except Zach and myself.

Master Jon walked in.

'Good show boys, quite enjoyable' he smiled and me and Zach burned with embarrassment.

'Don't be ashamed of your sexuality' he continued, noticing our faces.

'There's something that I forgot to tell you Jake, I'm surprised Zach didn't inform you'

I looked at Zach and he looked back, seeming just as confused as I was.

'Every once in a while, I like to reward our Escorts and Guards by allowing them to choose a few boys to spend the night with, you two have been chosen'.

Baldy and another Escort walked in smiling. I could see the outline of Baldy's huge cock in his trousers and immediately began shaking.

'Have fun' smiled Master Jon as he walked out.

The other Escort walked toward me and grabbed my under the chin, he spat in my face and laughed.

I felt sick.

Baldy grabbed Zach and pushed him against the wall with such force that I expected him to go through it.

I watched as Baldy pushed Zach onto his knees and took out his massive dick. It was definitely the biggest I'd ever seen and I felt sorry for Zach as Baldy forced himself inside the boy.

I jumped back to reality with a smack to the face and realized that the Escort still had a firm grip of me. My chastity device was unlocked and he was squeezing my dick and balls to the point where tears welled in my eyes.

'Sore?' he asked and I nodded violently 'good' he whispered as he squeezed harder.

I doubled over in pain.

I watched as he pulled his own dick out and was surprised at the size, it wasn't as big as Baldy's but it was still quite large.

He didn't give me the option of opening my mouth, his dick slid inside and was rammed down my throat.

I spluttered and gagged as he violated me but it didn't stop, he continued to rape my mouth until I heard Baldy talking to him.

I felt a pair of hands under my arms and was lifted to my feet. Zach stood beside me.

'We noticed that you two are a pair of dirty little pigs' said the Escort. We didn't reply.

'So show us just how dirty you two can get' smiled Baldy.

I looked at Zach and he looked back, we didn't know what to do.

'Okay we'll give you something to do' said the Escort.

I swallowed hard and listened to their idea.

'Zach asked me if he could go for a piss earlier, he hasn't been allowed, so now we'll let him but you're going to be his toilet'.

I'd already tasted piss but it didn't mean I wanted to taste it again, I nodded because I knew there was no way out of it.

Baldy pushed me onto my knees and Zach took his soft penis between his thumb and forefinger. I watched as a splash of piss shot out of his dick which was followed by a continuous stream.

I swallowed and swallowed but it was impossible to catch all of it. It ran down my cheeks and chin and I could feel it spray the rest of my naked body.

It lasted about thirty seconds before the last few drops were squeezed into my mouth. My belly was full and the taste lingered in my mouth.

'Lick up what you missed boy' spat Baldy, pushing my face to the ground.

I lapped it up like a dog, swallowing every last puddle of piss that I'd missed.

'He's a good little pig isn't he' smiled the Escort.

'Now, Zach, it's your turn. Jake hasn't gone to the toilet all day and now you're gonna be his toilet' said Baldy.

I had gone to the toilet but I needed to go again and pissing in Zach's mouth didn't really bother me.

I took my dick in my hand and aimed it at his mouth and just as I felt the pee make it's way to the tip of my dick, Baldy grabbed it and squeezed it closed.

It burned.

'No boy, I didn't mean piss' he sneered.

Zach's eyes widened and so did mine.

'W.w.what do you mean?' I stuttered.

'You're gonna feed you're little friend here' he said, kicking Zach in the balls. 'You're gonna feed him with shit'.

Baldy and the Escort laughed.

Even though it wasn't me getting a mouthful of shit, I didn't really want to be going for a "number 2" in front of these guys.

'Either you do it or we'll punish you two for the rest of the night' snapped Baldy, slapping my dick.

Zach looked at me, closed his eyes and nodded.

I turned around, positioned myself over his face and pushed. I felt my ass widen and I could hear Zach trying not to vomit as I filled his mouth.

The two men laughed hysterically as I finished.

'Wait, wait' laughed Baldy 'don't eat it yet, suck him off' he said, pushing me toward Zach and pushing my limp dick into Zach's shit-filled mouth.

It felt disgusting but it was already in, Zach closed his mouth around my dick and sucked. I tried to imagine something else, anything else, but I just couldn't.

It took about ten minutes before I felt the cum build up in my dick, I shot about four wads of cum into Zach's filthy mouth and pulled out my dirty dick.

'Swallow' said Baldy, grabbing Zach by the hair and pulling his head back.

I tried not to vomit as I watched my friend swallow shit and cum, my shit and cum.

He gagged but managed to get it down.

'Yous really are disgusting' said Baldy, picking Zach up and bending him over a desk, 'you take him' he said to the Escort, pointing at Zach, 'I wan't this boy'.

Baldy dragged me to the same desk and bent me over so that I was face to face with Zach and we both had a man standing behind us.

I could feel Baldy's dick pressing against my ass and I could see that the Escort was doing the same to Zach.

'Kiss each other' said Baldy, slapping my ass. I looked at Zach and we began kissing, the taste from his mouth was foul but we didn't stop.

I jumped in pain as Baldy edged his way inside me, the only thing stopping me from screaming was Zach's tongue and I knew the Escort was inside him too.

'Stop whining' snapped Baldy, pushing more of his monster inside me.

He continued until I could feel his balls against me and then pulled it out, he re-done this about four times before getting a steady rhythm. He smashed off my prostate to the point where it was hurting instead of feeling good but I continued to kiss my friend.

It took about fifteen minutes before Baldy shot his load inside me and about five minutes more before the Escort done the same.

'Good boy's' Baldy said, patting us on the head.

'For the rest of the night, we want you to wear these' said the Escort, holding two diapers.

'And these' laughed Baldy, holding two pacifiers, two bottles and a device I'd never seen before.

'This will stop you from having accidents in your diapers boys' he said, holding up the small, thin bar.

I felt the embarrassment immediately.

Really like this story. As others have said, it is harsh, but it is still enjoyable.

Great addition to the story! You are an amazing writer with an impressive imagination.

Come on, you need to continue, I hate being left to hang.

You are a great writer! and this store is very detailed and great! Some of the things made to do to the boys my god, i have been feeling physically sick for a while now so have had to stop. But im taking that as a good sign due to your high detail! Well done!

great read!
 

Great read really enjoyed reading it was totally hooked by it! hoping there is another instalment!