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Chapter 10
 

We all got into possision on the basketball court. My team was on defense and Jeremy's on the offense side of the court. Since I was the only girl there, the guys decided that it would be fair if I get the ball first. So I went to go stand in center infront of Logan. Jeremy signed to me that wveryone was ready, and to start the game. So I began to dribble the ball,and running towards the goal.

Trey: Hey, Cat I'm opened!

I quickly looked up at Trey and saw that he was closer to the goal,and that Kaiden was behinde him. So I threw the ball to trey, he caught it and then threw it into the goal. Since Trey was standing at a 3 pointer line, that helped our team get ahead with 3 points.
As we kept playing the game got more intense. Whichever team got 15 points first, won the game. Jeremy's team ended up being ahead of us, the score was 12 to 10. Jeremy had the ball, but James stole the ball and passed it to me. I began to dribble the ball, running back towards our goal. Right when I was about to shoot, Logan jumped on top of me, making me drop the ball.

Cathryn: OW! Dude, this is basketball not football. Get off of me.
Logan: Sorry, I tripped.
Cathryn: (being sarcastic) On what, flat surface?
Kaiden, James,and Jeremy comes over to Logan and I to make sure that we're okay.
Jeremy: Cat,you shouldn't be talking when you do that everyday.
Cathryn: Whatever.
James: (takes my left hand and starts to help me up) You okay babe?
Cathryn: (I feel a sharp pain when James pulls my wrist) Ow! James, let go. You're hurting my wrist.
James: (lets go of my wrist) I'm sorry.
Cathryn: It's okay. I think I hurt my wrist when Logan made me fall.
James: Hey Bradon, can you come here for just a sec?
Bradon: Yeah, sure. (runs over to us from the side lines) Whats up?
James: Cat thinks that she might have hurt her wrist when she fell.
Bradon: Oh ok. Cathryn can I please see your wrist to see if it's okay?
Cathryn: Okay.
Bradon: (holds my left wrist) Where does it hurt the wrost?
Cathryn: (I pont to the right side of my scaphoid) Right here.
Bradon: (starts feeling my wrist) It does feel warm and swollen. Can you try to move it by your self?
Cathryn: (Bradon lets go of my wrist and I try to move it, but it really hurts) No, I can't. It hurts to move.
Bradon: Yeah, you spraind your wrist. I don't think that you should continue playing the game.
Cathryn: But I have too.
Bradon: I'm sorry Cathryn, but you can not play. If you do, you will end up hurting it worse.
Jeremy: Cat, Bradon is right. You can't play.
James: Will we still be able to continue the game?
Jeremy: Maybe, if someone on my team sits out with her.
Bradon: I'll sit out, so I can fix Cathryn's wrist.
Jeremy: Okay.
Bradon: Where's all of your first aid stuff at?
Jeremy: Upstairs, in the kitchen.
Bradon: Okay. Cathryn and I will go upstairs, while yall continue the game.
Jeremy: Okay.

James, Kaiden, and Jeremy went back to the middle of the court. I sart to grabb my clothes to put them back on, but Logan takes them from me.
Logan: I don't think so pussy Cat. (Evidently James must have heard Logan, because he threw the basketball at the back of his head) Ow,shit.
James: Ooops. Sorry, it slipped.
Cathryn: (laughing at Logan) So how many points does that give my team?.
Logan: (ignoring my sarcasim) Everyone has to stay nude until the game is over.
Cathryn: But I'm not playing right now. I have to sit out because you made me hurt my wrist. Please give me my clothes back.
Logan: No. You must of miss understood me. Not this game. You can't put your clothes back on until the game of truth or dare is over.
Bradon: (At the door waiting for me) Cathryn, come on.
Cathryn: Okay, I'm coming. (talking to logan) Fine, whatever.

Still naked, Bradon and I leave the basketball stadium, and we are now in the kitchen. I sit down on a stool in the kitchen, next to the counter. Bradon opens the freezer, and grabbs the ice pack. He puts a towel around it, and hands it to me.
Bradon: Let this stay on your wrist for about 20 minutes. I'll let you know when its time to take it off. Where do you guys keep you bandages and stuf?
Cathryn: (I point at the top droor thats next to me) Right there.
Bradon:Okay. (Bradon goes through the droor, and grabbs the lime green elastic compression bandage.) Lets take the ice pack off for just a sec.
Cathryn: Okay.
I lay the ice pack down next to me on top of the counter. Bradon gently takes my wrist and starts wrapping the bandage around it.
Bradon: (finished wrapping my wrist, and puts the ice pack back on) There ya go. Just leave the ice pack on for a couple of more minutes. In order to heal your wrist you will need to put an ice pack on it every day for atleast 20 minutes.
Cathryn: Okay. Thanks.
Bradon: No prob, just doing my job. Wanna go back down stairs to watch the rest of the game?
Cathryn: Sure.
Just as we were about to leave the kitchen to go down stairs, all the guys come back up.
Bradon: Never minde. So who won?
Kaiden: We did.
Logan: I call dibbs on shaving Cat's little hairy pussy.
Cathryn: (My eyes grow wide over what Logan just said) Like I would ever trust you with a razor,espeacially when using it on me. You already made me sprain my wrist, I really don't want you to end up cutting me open with a razor.
Kaiden: Alright. Cat, if you had to choose one of us to shave you, who would you choose?
Cathryn: I don't know. I don't really care who, as long as it's not Logan.
Jeremy: Is it Okay if I can? I mean, you do trust your big bro right?
Cathryn: I guess, and yeah of course I trust you.
Jeremy: Okay then. I will shave you. I'm going to my room to grabb razors, a towel for all of us to use. Kaiden can you get a bowl of water in the kitchen, and bring it out in the living room?
Kaden: Yeah, sure.
We all leave to go sit in the living room. Jeremy leaves to go to his room, and Kaiden is still in the kitchen getting the bowl of water.

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Hey readers,
I'm very sorry for the long waits. Like I've said before I promise this story will never die until it's at the end. It's just that it's going to take sometime for me to finish typing it.I barley have time to get on anymore because I've been busy with school, my job,& other volunteer work. So just be patcient, & I'll have my next chapters up soon as I have the time to write them. Thank you all so much for reading my story, & I'm gald that you like it. :)

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Well as far as i am aware, the common grammar rules dictate, so as to avoid accent-based disputes, that the word "An" is only to replace "A" when preceeding a word with a beginning letter that is either a vowel, or, despite being often overlooked, "h".

Ergo:

An example,
A fruitful experience,
and An harrowing result.

I'm not sure if I like this story or not? This poor little sister is being abused and treated like an object by all but her boyfriend and even he doesn't seem to be sticking up for her much the poor thing :(
Still an intriguing read however, please continue.

New Characters
 

Characters


Zacarie: Is 16, gay. Friends with Cathryn, Trey, James, Jeremy, and Kaiden. He has short dirty blond hair (to his ears), green eyes, 5"6, white/caucasian, and is very slim/muscular.


Justin: Is 18, straight. Cathryn's ex-boyfriend. Friends with Logan. He has very short brown redish hair, green eyes, 5"9, white/caucasian, and is slim/very muscular.

Chapter 11
 

Me, James, Trey, and Jordan are all sitting on the floor in the middle of the living room. Kaiden comes back in the room, and sits the blow of water infront of us. Jeremy also comes back with 4 razors, 4 towels, and 4 bandanas. He gives Kaiden, Logan and Bradon each a towel and a razor. He hands a bandana to Jordan, Trey, and James. Then comes behinde me and ties a bandana around my head using it as a blindfold.

Cathryn: (trying to keep Jeremy from blinde folding me) Jeremy, stop. What are you doing?!?

Jeremy: Cat, let go. Just calm down. Kaiden can you hold her hands down for me?

Kaiden: Sure. (Kaiden kneels down in front of me and grabbs my hands, holding them down)

Jeremy: Theres been a change of plan. No one on your team gets to know who shaves them. So your each going to be blindfold, until your each done being shaved. (Jeremys finally done tying the blindfold) Don't even think about untying it.

Kaiden lets go of my hands and I feel him walk away. I couldn't see anything, everything was pitch black. Jeremy tied it so tight it felt like the blood vains between my head and my eyes were going to pop. I try to tugg on the bandana a bit to loosen it, but someone grabbs my hand to stop me.

Jeremy: Cathryn don't touch the blindfold. If I have too I'll go get some rope to tie your hands togeather. Do you want me to tie your hands?

Cathryn: No. I'm sorry. It's just, you tied it too tight, and I was just trying to loosen it a bit. (Jeremy loosens the blindfold a bit)

Jeremy: There is that better?

Cathryn: Yeah.

Jeremy: (pushes my shoulders to lay down) Now lay down, and keep your hands by your side.

Cathryn: Okay. (I do as Jeremy says)

I'm now laying on the floor, hands by my side, and can't see a thing. I start to hear the sound of shaving cream being squirted out from the cans. Not knowing who it was, I feel someone rubb the shaving cream on top of my vagina. It felt cold, and a bit weird. I never had anyone shave me before. I never even shaved myself down there before, I only trim. I then feel the razor wiping the shaving cream off, as it cutts the hairs off. As seconds went by who ever shaved me was done. They cleaned me off with a towel, and I feel someone else come behinde me to help sit me back up.
Jeremy: Lift your butt up. (I do as he says, and some one else is holding my waste up, so I wont sit down)

Cathryn: What are you doing?

Jeremy: You are to sit on your hands until the others are finished. Should help keep you to not touch your blinde fold. (He puts my right wrist under my butt. I feel a sharp pain as he grabbs my left wrist)

Cathryn: Ow, Stop! Your hurting my wrist.

Jeremy: Oh, yeah. Sorry, I forgot. (they put my waist back down, making me sit on my right hand) Just don't move it. (He sits my left wrist down by my side)

Cathryn: It hurts to move at all, and now hurts even more thanks to you.

Jeremy: I'm really sorry. (I feel him pick my wrist back up and kiss it) There does that feel better?

Cathtryn: (couldn't help but smile. Jeremy hasn't kissed any of my booboos to make it feel better, since I was 12) Yeah, thanks.

Jeremy: Good. Now just stay still Okay? Were almost finished.

Cathryn: Okay.

I hear Jeremy walk away. As minutes went by, I finally felt someone come behinde me again, and start to untie my blindfold. I looked behinde me and it wa Kaiden, he finally took my blindfold completely off and walked away. I liked that I was finally able to see again. Evidently everyone had there blindfold off before me, because everyone else was sitting back down on the couches. James was sitting next to Trey and Jordan, so I sat down on his lap.

James : Hey babe. (James couldn't help but to stare at my vagina) Mmmm, lookin sexy. (He wraps his arms aroud my wast and kisses me on the cheek)

Cathryn: (joking) Down boy. Maybe if your good we can have some fun later on tonight. (James kiss me on the lips)

Jeremy: (talking to me) I'm thinking about taking the lock off your door.

Cathryn: (I roll my eyes at Jeremy's comment) Haha very funny.

Trey: Hey Jeremy, is it okay if Zacarie can come over?

Jeremy: Yeah sure.

Cathryn: Zacarie's coming?

Trey: Yep, I just got a text from him. He said that he'll be here in a couple of minutes.

I was glad to hear that Zacarie was coming over. He's another good friend of mine. I havn't seen him since the last day of school. We use to be neighboors, but he had to move to a different neighborhood.


Jeremy: Does he know what we've been doing?

Trey: Yeah, I told him. If thats okay.

Jeremy: It's cool. I actually meant to invite him, but I didn't have any way of contacting him.

Kaiden: Jordan, it's your turn to pick the dare.

Jordan: Okay. I dare all of us to go skinny dipping.

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