I am loving this story so far

This is a very good story.

Great Story please continue

Thats a great story please continue.

neat story fully enjoying this...

Very interesting. I think it was rushed a bit in the beginning, but I see you're fixing that as the story progresses. Great story, please continue!

I like it, a lot. Good work

time for a biology lesson:
Fraternal twins refers to when two eggs are fertilized, though many believe it refers to when twins do not look alike.

Identical twins refers to when one egg is fertilized and it splits into two babies. (the scientific term being mono-zygotic.)

Although the term "identical" can also mean:
"exactly alike; incapable of being perceived as different", when it is in relation to twins, it means:"derived from a single egg or ovum"

Tim and Tina are opposite sexes, so they cannot be identical.

(I only know this because my older sisters are Fraternal twins, that look almost exactly alike)

but i do like the story

Please finish this story, its soooo good

pleaase finish your story its really gooooood

this story is awsome keep it up

Let's hear some more!!!

did the story die?

please carry on:) this is a great story