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Oh wow you are dedicated aren't you?
Very nice chapter Again I must compliment you on your pace and writing style as well (again) So can't wait and good luck |
I'm not the only person dedicated to my story thank you (again) :) for your many comments Abmp ;)
Next chapter might be up tonight :D Cant be bothered with homework right now!!! |
Right heres chapter six hope you like it !!
Chapter 6 And as I said to myself “in for a penny, in for a pound,” I lowered my trunks and noticed my 7 inch dick spring up standing to attention. I heard Ryan burst into laughter behind me. I could only imagine what he thought of my butt, I thought it was rather peachy myself. I then suddenly realized, why was I thinking about Ryan staring at my gorgeous butt when I’ve got this stranger staring at my erect cock! I turned at looked at the man and he was looking at me in shock. For about 10 seconds we stood there staring at each other, both having similar perturbed looks on our face however our expressions couldn’t be any more different. I had an awkward grin on my face whereas his jaw was wide open. I turned and glanced at Ryan; he started giving me signals to look at the man’s dick. So I thought to myself “I’ve already come this far I might as well see it through, let’s see how freaked out I can get this person.” So for some reason and unknown to my conscious brain I started winking at him then looking at my dick then winking at him again. After a few more of those and having a little giggle inside because this guy has had the same shocked expression for the past minute as I think I may have stopped his flow , I leaned over a took a look at his semi erect 6 inch cock saying “phwoar” to him afterwards. And with that I bend down to pull my trunks up. After realizing that because I bent down I would’ve shown the love of my life my erect dick and balls, I turned to try and see his reaction only to see he was looking at me with his head tilted like was admiring me ! “HELL YEAH” my mind shouted and then yanked up my trunks and turned and walked back to Ryan arrogantly and noticing that the guy I had just shown my dick to was leaving like nothing had just happened and Ryan was standing with a facial expression that only looked like he was in awe of me. “OH MY GOD well done James I really didn’t think that you would do it! I have massive respect for you! Someone asked me to do that dare and I was too chicken but seeing you do it makes me realize I need to man up more, and not just in the confidence department. Right any dare you give me now I will do it without fail!” Wow I didn’t realize seeing me exhibiting myself like that would make such a big reaction we must play this a lot more! Now what an opportunity he’s just given me I could either give him a super hard one so I get to see him naked as he’s seen me or I could give him an easy one so I don’t look over keen to see him naked. Right ok I’ve got one. “Ok Ryan I dare you…… |
Hehe i hoped you like the chapter everyone!
Right, now because youve been epically amazing people im going to give you a chance to send in a dare that you would like Ryan to do So pm me if you have any suggestions And if i write the chapter and after you have a good idea still send it to me as i might use it later :D Thank you all for supporting me and for just being generally awesome :D |
Whoa. Even if that last chap was in a bathroom, it was pretty damn hot.
Keep it up man, I'm speaking for all the lurkers out here, we LOVE you <3 -Dylsterr |
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Once again very very nice chapter (I feel like a broken record kinda :P )
Ur just so good that my comments are basically quoting the other comments I posted. Will be waiting avidly (is that how you spell it?) |
I'm not copying Dylan right now. I swear.
Whoa. Even if that last chap was in a bathroom, it was pretty damn hot. Keep it up man, I'm speaking for all the lurkers out here, we LOVE you <3 -Dylsterr Er, I mean- -Marisaaa[: |
1100 VIEW WTF MEGA FAINTISM !!!
Thank you dylan if you think im good at writing when theyre in the bathroom imagine what im like in bed WHEN THEYRE IN BED I MEAN ;) Thanks Tylerr i aim too please :D And dont worry Abmp your comments make me sure that my "skills" aren't wavering :) And thank you dylan i mean marisa ;) i should be able to put the next chapter tonight YAYAGE |
So pumped for more of this story. It really is fantastic!
And orgasmic! And awesome! YAY! : ) |
Thank you nuditydudity for the like 3 compliments :)
It was my one week anniversary and so far i dont have a single complaint or regret so thank you all <3 Anyways heres my next chapter :D “Ok Ryan I dare you…… “Well?!” he shouted in frustration “Right as you just made me just show my goods off to a randomer you have to basically to the same,” I said as he looked at me like I’ve just told him to cut off his right arm! “Don’t worry it’s not as bad as you think you don’t HAVE to flash your dick but it will get you more points.” “Points?” he said with a confused look on his face as I took a seat on the toilet about to explain the rules to my new fun game. “Yeah you get 1 point for mooning someone and 3 points for flashing you dick at someone but I might give you some points if you do something totally outrageous as well just in case you want to mix it up and you have to get at least 5 points by the time we get in the car to go home. But I have to see it so I know you’ve actually done the dirty deed.” I said with a small grin on my face, I knew this was a brilliant dare as I had an excuse to watch him without him thinking I’m gay and most probably stop him from doing it ! MUHAHAHA I was an evil genius! “Oh God you’re not letting me off lightly are you!" He said with a worried look on his face. Trying to reassure him and make sure he would do it I said “fine I give you a mystery prize on your party in a couple of weeks then! The more points you get the better the gift.” I concluded with a wink. “FINE, I'll start now then!” and with that he swung around and shoved his ass in my face lowering his trunks at the same time revealing his masculine butt. Every fiber of my being hates sitting on a public toilet seat but at this point I absolutely did not regret the decision to sit here! Well some might call the fact that I was thanking the decision to sit on a toilet weird if you saw the muscular slightly toned butt in your face you would be thanking everyone for everything. I sat there with this butt which I was so close to I could’ve probably kissed it , and boy did I want to. After what felt like a few minutes of ecstasy but was actually a few seconds for my eyes and for little James down below, he proceeded to pull his trunks back up turning and smiling, saying “1 point to me” then walking out the toilet to do more for his dare, I sat there in a comatose state thinking; “I HAVE to see that butt again! Toilets For The Win” and after a few seconds I got up and ran (well walked quickly as you aren't allowed to run in a swimming pool!) after Ryan to “document his points” if you know what I mean!!! |
Haha lol.
And now there's humor too, and who said it couldn't get any better (nobody). I agree it's orgasmic |
HAHA Abmp flattering will get you everywhere :p
Next chapter ill try to get up tonight but to be honest its to freaking hot in my room and i cant properly concentrate lol :D but ill throw a couple of ice cubes down my shirt that should cool me down ;) |
hope you like this chapter ! im trying to develop the story more now ;)
“I HAVE to see that butt again! Toilets For The Win” and after a few seconds I got up and left to find Ryan to “document his points” if you know what I mean!!! Not much happened in the first hour of the 2 we had left, Ryan would start to lower his trunks but stop and proceed to pull them up before anything was revealed. I thought maybe he wasn’t confident about his body and that somehow he was more confident around me like I was with him but that was probably me being over optimistic. After the sixth time of almost mooning I noticed Ryan’s facial expression change to frustration as he swam over to where I was sitting on a platform in the pool. “What’s wrong?” I said. I had never seen him like this before he looked so vulnerable. “Why can’t I do it? Every time I get close to doing it I start shaking and my muscles tense up! WHAT’S WRONG WITH ME?” he shouted at me trying to contain the tears however not very well. I never knew a dare would affect him, or anyone in fact, so strongly. “Come on it’s only a silly dare you don’t have to do it if you don’t want to?” I whispered hoping to calm him down. “It’s not just the dare! It’s whenever I try to talk to new people or do new things!” he said, his tears more noticeable than before. I couldn’t believe what I was hearing, that this cool confident person who I met had such low self confidence! I put my arm around him trying to tell him I was there for him. By this time the lust for Ryan was out of my mind I just wanted to care for him make sure he was alright. Seeing him like this was making me feel helpless, what could I do? As I pulled him closer to me I felt him trembling. Something must’ve happened to Ryan to not believe in himself and put up a façade so everyone thought he was happy. I knew that when he was ready to talk about his problems I wanted to be there to support and comfort him no matter what. We sat there together, still, with my arm round his shoulder for about half an hour totally ignoring the outside world. I was contemplating what terrible event must’ve happened to him and when it occurred. It had to of taken place long before I knew him for all those barriers to hide his true feelings to have been placed. Then suddenly Ryan turned to me and with a small grin on his face he said “you know you are an amazing friend James.” Of course that made me reciprocate the smile back. It was at this point I realized I didn’t just lust after Ryan anymore, I loved him. |
Heck yeah, first comment!
Have I mentioned how much I love this story? Well, I love it. So. Freaking. Much. It might be a little bit illegal, how much I love this story. Also, your writing is pretty cool, too. Just add that to the list of things I love about this. Keep up the good work! [: -Marisaaa[: |
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