Orange Bikini [FICTION]

[aserwer]

My first story, not really sure if I'm doing everything right, but here we go...

CHAPTER 1

The school trip was coming up on Friday. I had always wanted to go to Florida; it seemed like such a cool location, especially to be without parents. I had never been, but our senior class was going as part of a graduation celebration. Y'know, stupid stuff like that. I was a decent student, never very athletic but kept in shape, and had about mid-length blond hair. I never really got any girls, but I had a couple close friends who were female. They were Jess and Aubrey.

Jess was the typical "popular-girl-who's-been-friends-with-loser-for-years". We became friends in kindergarten, and since then my social status never taken off, while her's skyrocketed. In 6th grade, she already had B Cup breasts, and by our senior year she was a very full and well-endowed 34C. Her long brown hair had streaks of blond and she had an extremely tanned and toned body.

Aubrey was the kind of tomboy who everybody loved. She was in every after school activity imaginable. She played all the sports she could, she was in the musical, she was in student council, she was first chair clarinet in band. Everybody knew who Aubrey was, and everybody loved her. She was funny, pretty cute and smart as all get out.

The day we arrived in Florida, we got put into our rooms. Aubrey and Jess and their other friend (Kelly) were in one room, and I got put into one room with two of the weirdest kids in school. No one really knew anything about Lawrence except that he was strange, a little smelly, and very sweaty. Shaun on the other hand was a real fastidious, clean figure who no one really wanted to be friends with because he was gay. He had short blond, spiked hair and looked like he was taken straight from an N*Sync poster.

After everyone had gotten situated in their room, everyone met for dinner. At the hotel was a restaurant with a tiki, island feel. It was pretty dark and the only real light came from torches lit around the establishment. I sat with Aubrey, Jess and a couple of my guy friends who sat on the farther end of the table. We weren't allowed to leave until three hours had elapsed, so to pass the time we decided to play a little truth or dare.

"Aubrey, you're up first. Truth or dare?" I said. She responded with truth. "Who's the weirdest guy you've kissed?"

"... Kenneth." She responded.

"Kenneth?!" both me and Jess bust out laughing. "He's 800 pounds!"

"He was skinnier in 8th grade, okay? God, that doesn't leave the table. Jess, truth or dare?"

"Dare! Of course!"

"I dare you to... rub your ass against the waiter's dick when he comes around."

"No problem!" Jess said, as this mischievous grin burst onto her face. We waited about two minutes. When the waiter came by, Jess pushed her knife off the table as the waiter was gathering our empty drinks. She got up and as she bent over to pick it up, rubbed her delightful ass across the pants of the waiter. His face turned bright red and you could see he was turned on by the tent that was being pitched. He immediately grabbed the cups and rushed into the kitchen.

Jess sat down, with a satisfied smile. She turned to me. "Alright Dane, it's your turn. Truth or dare?"

"Uhm..." I didn't know which to pick. "Dare? Haha..." I nervously laughed, sort of afraid of what Jess had in mind.

Jess said in an almost scary tone; "I dare you to go the rest of this trip pretending to be a girl."

Shit.

[aserwer]

Please tell me if I should continue and whether or not you guys like it...

[leveret2]

Please tell me if I should continue and whether or not you guys like it...

Amazing story! You should definitely keep going!


Plot: great start!, while it's been done before, it has a new twist: 8/10
Grammar/Mechanics: Excellent writing!: 10/10
Speed: I generally like slower stories that describe specific events. However, that doesn't mean that you like writing slowly: 9/10
Enjoyable: This story seems to be taking an enjoyable twist: 9/10

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[Xdressbitch]

Well... Let's put it this way... If u don't keep writing I'm gonna have to kill u:) I've been waitigfor a story like this one!!! So please keep writing!!!

[Memories for Life]

It's ok so far! You went into some detail about the main characters -- what personalities each were and their appearance. This is always good to start any story.

I was thinking your main character was going to go thru the entire story being told in the 1st person then he was named "Dane" near the end.

As far as the dare goes, it was totally out of left field that one of his best buds for most of his young age takes this opportunity to jackpot him. The "scary tone" suggests Jess and Audrey had planned this! You have to build that up, why did they both want to humiliate Dane? Some form of revenge?

BTW: a 9/10 rating from someone with 2 posts who just signed up today? Could you be related? Or are you doing a dare about writing this story?

[leveret2]

BTW: a 9/10 rating from someone with 2 posts who just signed up today? Could you be related? Or are you doing a dare about writing this story?

Yes, I can understand how you would be suspicious.
However, I am someone completely unrelated who has been lurking around getdare anonymously for the last several months. When I came across such an amazing story that no one had read, I wanted to make sure that he would continue.

[Memories for Life]

However, I am someone completely unrelated who has been lurking around getdare anonymously for the last several months. When I came across such an amazing story that no one had read, I wanted to make sure that he would continue.

You're join date is 5-30-2010! You have zero visitor posts -- the only posts you do have are for this story!

[jambalaya]

But no kidding, this is a good story... You should continue... It's kinda rare to see such a plot...

[aserwer]

I haven't created other accounts or anything to get myself extra comments... I'm not gonna stoop that low :P

[BettyBoop]

It's nice to see a story about actual TorD, this has potential, I hope you carry on.

[Memories for Life]

I haven't created other accounts or anything to get myself extra comments... I'm not gonna stoop that low :P

I'm not suggesting that leveret2 is your contrivance but that particular person posts a rating system with no other ratings for comparison. You can say you like or dislike a story without some arbitrary ratings system: "I give it 3 thumbs up! My highest rating!". It's like buying something from eBay from a seller with 100% approval from 1 customer!

Xdressbitch: WTF with the violence threat? "If u don't keep writing I'm gonna have to kill u! I've been waiting for a story like this one!!! So please keep writing!!!" You created your account on May 30, 2010 -- 1 day after this story was started!!!

Aserwer, please continue with your story! Could you build more into the backstory of why the main character's two closest female friends have waited most of their young life to humiliate him right now?

[coolio5]

good story so far. looking forward to where this is going

[Shiney]

I'm not generally a big fan of stories on here, and I've read a lot, believe me. I've put up with a lot of bad stories hoping to read one like this. It's not perfect by any means, but it looks like it has a lot of potential. Please, keep going. The worst thing you could do would be to not continue this.

Also, guys, no need for a flamewar here. I just want to read this story, no need to duke it out over how valid someone's rating system is. The point is, this is a good story, in my honest opinion, and there should be more of it.

[Wedgies123456789]

Definitely continue! This is a really good story! I love the end line!

[aserwer]

CHAPTER 2

"You guys can't be serious!" I said. We'd played truth or dare in the past, and it had never gotten this serious... for me.

"Well, last time we played truth or dare, you made me come to school with no underwear and a short skirt. I thought i was time for a little pay back, so Aubrey and I thought we'd plan a little trick for you on our vacation."

"*sigh* I can't do this. Everyone will know I'm a dude in drag and it'll be embarrassing! And how will I get away with being a girl when Dane will get called at attendance every morning?"

"We'll tell them you went home sick, they don't care. And not to mention, we're makeover wizards! We'll make you into one bodacious babe right away!" Aubrey replied. She had a huge grin on her face. "We've already arranged with Kelly to move into another room. You'll rooming with us... Danielle."

When the dinner was over, I snuck into their room. I couldn't believe what I saw. They had skirts, dresses, bras, panties, thongs, tops and so much more spread out around the room. There were also wigs, breast forms, duct tape and makeup. "Let's get started!" Aubrey said. "First, you're gonna need to learn how to tuck."

"How to what?" I asked.

"How to hide your penis. You can't be walking around with a skirt and a boner, now can you?" The two of them laughed.

"*sigh* I guess not..."

"We looked this up online. You need to just push your testicles up and cover your penis with your scrotum. And then tape! Now get going! We have a lot of work to do." I retreated into their bathroom, and followed their steps. As I pulled my underwear back over my pelvis, I was shocked at what I saw. A completely flat frontside! There was no trace that I had a dick at all. And it didn't even hurt. I came back and the girls applauded.

"Step 1 complete!" Jess said. "Now, we need to test the breasts forms. We're gonna give you size 36C, so that you have a nice, full rack. You're probably gonna be wearing these all week, so get used to them. We've got this red bra that we can just place the forms in, so test them out!" I put on the bra and took one look in the mirror. Without a bulge in my underwear and with full 'breasts', I looked like a woman from the neck down. Maybe Jess and Aubrey had something going.

"Now, time to get you in tomorrow's wardrobe! Tomorrow's the trip to Disney World, so we're just gonna go with that red bra, a mid length purple skirt, a white blouse and we'll let you pick your underwear. And we'll also need to work on your makeup..."

After I tried on a couple of my new clothes, I picked a pink Victoria's Secret thong, shaved my legs, and got a solid look with my makeup, I looked at the clock; it was already six o clock! We'd been working for nearly seven hours on my look, and it had passed like the snap of a finger. I was fully dressed as a girl, and besides the fact that my brown spiked hair was very boyish, I had to admit, I looked pretty cute. Is it weird to say that about myself?

With just one hour until the roll call in the morning, I had to get my wig situated and pick out my shoes. With my curled brown wig, I completely looked like a girl. I had nice tits, cute clothes and bouncy hair, I was ready to head out for the first time as Danielle. I was nervous as hell. I couldn't talk to my friends or talk in general; my voice would give it away that I was a dude. As we clumped together for roll call, they called out everyone's name.

"James Cann?"

"Here!"

"Jessie Cain?"

"Here!"

"Dane Carpenter?"

Jess piped up. "He flew home sick..."

"Okay..." They went through all the names on the list until the very end. "Oh... It looks like there's a name scribbled at the bottom... Danielle Carter?"

To get a feminine voice, Aubrey spoke for me. "Here!" she said.

"Alright, then we're good! Off to Disney World..."

[aserwer]

CHAPTER 3

On the bus ride to the Magic Kingdom, I sat between Jess and Aubrey. I was so nervous. Sitting in a skirt was a whole different animal then sitting in a pair of jeans. I had to keep my legs closed together, and I was fully aware of the guys in the row across the bus aisle from us staring at my chest. The girls made sure to have me wear a white blouse over a red bra, so the boys could all see the bra through the shirt.

The bus ride seemed to last forever. The gazing eyes of the drooling guys felt violating and the minute the bus rolled to a stop, I got up and hurried out of the bus. We all were able to go wherever we wanted, so Jess, Aubrey and I stuck together. I was determined to stay out of the hair of as many people as possible for the rest of the week.

Unfortunately for me, the rest of the class didn't want to give me an easy job. Kevin Wallace was the starting quarterback on the school's football team. After leading them to an undefeated season, Kevin had gotten offers from big-time football schools like Florida and Ohio State. He was the big man on campus, and as Danny he had always been such a dick to me. In my freshman year, he broke into my gym locker and stole my clothes, making me walk around in my disgusting gym uniform all day.

However, as Danielle he saw something that piqued his interest. As we went around Disney World, he always seemed to be right behind me in line. But luckily enough, I was able to avoid him. It was about 6 o clock when we went to the Tiki Room. We had to be back to the bus soon, and we hadn't yet gotten to go. As we stood in line for the Tiki Room, I let out a sigh of relief. I looked around and saw no sign of Kevin. I got close to Aubrey's ear and told her about Kevin.

"I'm telling you, he's freaking me out. Almost everywhere I've been, he's been right behind me!"

Aubrey just laughed. "Well at least he's not here. So calm down, jesus."

As we sat down in the Tiki Room, the doors started to close for the show to start. The lights started to dim, but before it was completely dark I noticed one last person slide through the Tiki Room doors. The dark body came over and sat right next to me.

"Hey, Danielle, right?"

He leaned in closer to my ear. Shit.

"My name's Kevin. I hear you're new. I'm kind of a big deal."

He put his hand on my knee. Double shit.

"Come to my room when we get back to the hotel. I'll welcome you properly..."

He slid his hand up closer to my pelvis. Triple shit.

[vivala_dare]

great story keep it up :)

[222jkt]

wow, you should continue! :D i would so wannna try that dare to!

[aserwer]

Chapter 4

Kevin's hand clutched tighter on the inside of my thigh. While I definitely thought I was straight, I could feel my dick starting to grow. That was the worst thing that could happen. If I got a boner, my tuck would pop out and my cover would be blown. As Kevin was about to lean in and kiss my neck, I busted out the exit door as fast as possible.

With no concern of anything around me, I ran to the nearest bathroom. I had to stop myself before running into the boy's bathroom. I had to remember that I was a chick to everyone else. Inside the bathroom, I caught my breath. Dear god, that was close. What if he had slid his hand up a little higher? What if he had ran his hand through my hair and the wig comes off? It was the exact scenario I was worried about when Aubrey and Jess first told me about the dare.

After a close scare with Kevin, the day was over. All the students loaded onto the bus and headed back to the hotel rooms. On the ride back, I told Aubrey and Jess what had happened in the Tiki Room.

"I guess that means we did a good job of making you look hot!" Aubrey said. She and Jess laughed.

"Shut up you guys. What happens if he finds out that I'm not 'Danielle'? I'm screwed! He tells everyone, they put me in a fake gay relationship with Shaun, my high school career is ruined!" I was fuming.

They sorta shut up after that point. I guess they must've felt bad for me. Maybe they would feel bad enough to make me not have to go through any more of the dare the rest of the week!

They didn't.

So the three of us went back into the room, I decided to head into the bathroom and get out of my Danielle 'costume'. I started to take off my foundation in the bathroom first.

"Hey Dane, we're gonna check out the gift shop. Be right back!" Aubrey yelled from the other room.

"Alright, see ya in a bit." I yelled. I heard them leave the room, but they forgot to close the door. "Pfft, idiots."

I went into the bedroom, grabbed the door and started to close it. However, something stopped it. I looked down; there was a foot in the door.

"Hey, where'd you go during the Tiki Room show babe..."

[aserwer]

Chapter 5

Shit. It was Kevin. I couldn't say anything or else he'd know I was Dane, and considering I was still in partially full makeup, there was nothing about me that'd make him think that I wasn't just the new girl.

"Come on toots, I know I make you speechless, but tell me why you left..."

I kept trying to close the door, slamming it on his foot, but he wouldn't budge. He threw the door open and walked right in, closing and locking the door behind him. From the shock of him busting open the door, I fell right on my ass. Sitting hopeless in the middle of a hotel room with a sex crazed jerk, my heart was racing in panic.

"Come on babe, let's give you a Springwater High welcome..."

I stumbled up and ran into the bathroom. But not fast enough. Kevin was right behind me. Before I could close the door, Kevin came in and closed the door. He slammed me against the bathroom wall and slapped his hands hard against my ass. He alternated hands, squeezing each cheek firmly. I slapped away his hands.

"Aw... Don't be stubborn Danielle... Let's do this the old fashioned way." He ripped off his shirt and turned me around. He held each of my arms against the wall and leaned in, licking my neck. I was sure I was straight, but I had to admit, being restrained and pushed around like a sex slave sorta turned me on.

"Mmm baby.... I'm gonna make you moan like the bitch you are." As I fought him off, he moved his body closer, using it as a restraint against my body. He started licking my neck more. He was doing it so passionately, starting with a teasing little tip-of-the-tongue lip, moving towards full on bitting my neck.

Suddenly he stopped and I pushed him away from me. He fell back and just started laughing. He got up and blocked the only escape, the door.

"Heh... You dirty little slut. You don't push me around. I think it's about time we played a little dice dare to settle on your punishment for being a naughty little girl..." He pulled out a dice and laid out the rules.

"If it lands on one or two, you suck my dick. If it lands on three or four, you give me a titjob. Five or six, handjob for me it is."

I couldn't do anything about it. He was stronger then me, standing in front of the door and ridiculously horny. He rolled the die, and I couldn't do anything to stop him.

"Well look at that. It lands on a...."

[bobg55]

great story keep going. :)

[Coyote]

this is great!! i love it!

[Memories for Life]

comment removed - sent pm

[bamoguy]

Please keep it going! This is really great! There are not many stories like this one! I wanna know what happens!!!!

[guy709]

plz keep going it is awesome

[aserwer]

Chapter 6:

"Lookie here. We have a 2; get on your knees babe."

Shit. I had nothing I could do. Kevin was standing in front of the door, unzipping his pants slowly and getting out his dick. I could already see through his pants that the whole exchange in the bathroom had given him a boner.

Now, with his dick hanging out, I knew I simply had one thing I could do. If I tell him I'm actually Dane, he beats my ass. I give him a blowjob, I'm, well, giving a dude a blowjob! If I try to escape, he probably tries to screw me, meaning he finds out I'm a dude.

On my knees, I stepped forward. His throbbing dick was staring me right in the eye. I had never actually seen another guys dick, so I never realized how small my 5 and 1/2 inches seemed compared to his seemingly 7 and 1/2 inches.

"If this isn't the best orgasm I've ever felt babe, I'm making you do it again." he threatened. Crap. I could've easily gotten a shitty blowjob out of the way fast, but not now.

"Any minute now!"

Kevin was getting antsy. With no other choice, I decided to just get it over with. I decided to start slow, kissing right below his head.

"Shit!" Kevin yelled, his body tingling with the tease. "Keep going..."

I continued kissing his head, before slowly taking the tip of his head into my mouth. With it in my mouth, I massaged it a bit with my tongue. I could taste the salty precum.

I wasn't gay, but I felt something spring below. Shit, my dick had popped from it's tuck. If you looked closely, you could see I was pitching a tent in my skirt. Crap. I had to get this blowjob over with and get Kevin out of here before he noticed.

In an effort to get him to cum faster, I suddenly took the full dick in my mouth. At first I wanted to gag, but slowly I got used to it and started working my tongue.

"Shit baby! Goddamn!" Kevin was yelling with pleasure, but he still wasn't cumming. I started rubbing his balls to try and get it over with. "You slut! How many times have you done this? I'm getting... close..." His breath was getting faster.

As he started thrusting and fucking my head, my boner grew. Was I gay? Nah, I couldn't be. It's just a coincidence. While I was deep in thought, he thrust my head off his dick and screamed. Cum flew all over my face, into my open mouth and even down my shirt. Kevin's back slid down the door.

"Oh...... my god..... You're amazing." His eyes were glowing with appreciation. "Let's go again."

[anonimousbob]

great continuation of the story, I'm looking forward to the next part

[bamoguy]

Please continue this! Great story!!!

[lordbob]

please continue with the story

[Rawk Hawk]

I know it's probably hopeless...... but please???/

[alex_carter]

OMG, I so can't wait to find out what's gonna happen. Please post again soon.

[MeasinToday]

Love it Love it Love it

[aserwer]

Chapter 7:

I just shook my head. I had to get the hell out of there!

"I don't think I was asking" Kevin said in a devilish tone. He started to slink up, his eyes flaring with the idea of another sexual experience. He grabbed my shoulders, trying to rip it off. "Take it off baby!". His hands slowly worked their way down from my shoulders. "It's okay, I don't need to see these double D's anyway, let's just get right down to your pussy..."

His hands worked their way down towards my throbbing boner. Shit. I was screwed now. His hands slowly moved until I felt them brush my shaft. Kevin's eyes grew wide.

"What the fuck?"

He lifted my skirt to find my thong, with my raging erection nearly falling out. Kevin fell backwards in shock. "What the fuckin' hell? AGH!" He grabbed for my head, and ripped off the wig. I yelled in pain.

"Holy shit! What the fuck? Dane?"

I tried to get up, but he just pushed me down. I tried kicking him away, but he just grabbed my foot.

"You little tranny," he said. "The football team's gonna have a lotta fun with you."

[bamoguy]

Good good good! Keep it up!

[aserwer]

Sorry for the short chapter, just needed a chapter to get back in the groove of things. I've got a solid direction for the story to head so the next chapters will be longer.

[black out]

well hurry up i need a good story to read.

[Ethan2cu]

What will the team think when they find out the quarterback was blown by a dude

[aserwer]

Chapter 8:
Kevin made me write a note for Jess and Aubrey. I told them I was going out for a walk and that I might be back later. The minute I finished writing the note, Kevin grabbed my arm and violently started pulling me out of the room. I tried fighting, but it was to no avail. He was taking me back to his room. As we walked he continually grabbed my ass, and as I slapped his hand away he'd respond with a "damn shemale" or "friggin' trap". After about a two-minute walk, Kevin threw me against the wall right outside his room.

"Now you play nice... Danielle. You do everything I tell you to, or else the whole offensive line will get to do what they want."

He swung open his door. To my surprise, there were about five or six shirtless guys sitting around. The room was smoky, and it seemed like most of them had been smoking pot. Shawn, one of the overweight offensive lineman, was the first to acknowledge my existence.

"Yo Kevin, who's the slut you got this time?"

Kevin gave a slight smirk. "Her name's Danielle boys. And I don't just got her... I brought her back for you boys!"

The room erupted with cheer. The first to stand up was Ron, a black linebacker. He was about 6'4, 210 pounds and well sculpted, with a six pack. If I was about to have any of these guys dominate me, I think he'd be my first choice.

"Lemme at her!" He yelled, as he started to drunkenly stumble forward. He brought me close and whispered in my ear "Hope you like milk chocolate...". His breath smelled distinctly of alcohol. He grabbed my hand and started leading me to the bathroom.

With a nervous glance, I looked to Kevin. All he did was whisper,

"Good luck."

[aubrella]

Please put up the next part!!!

[katebabe21]

this is really good! keep going :)

[Jamesthemoose]

I know it's probably pointless to say, but carry on!

[Eminem jr]

Lol yea cmon we want more!

[dare-boy]

come on.. finish the story, this is the one i like the most and wish to read more.

[daremaster 1]

I really am enjoying this story, great job and keep it up.

[Lanjoben]

come on keep posting i love this story

[Eminem jr]

You guys do realise this has been dead for a while right?