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04-15-2010, 07:35 PM
Okay now when you read this please give your thoughts on the story.
Characters:
Ali- A girl with long blonde hair she is captain of her school's soccer team and is head cheerleader.
Jason: The smartest guy in his grade who skipped 2 grades he is also very good at soccer as well as baseball.
Kayla: Jason's ex girl freind and Ali's best freind. She has long brown hair she is also on the soccer team and cheerleading squad.
Zak: Jason's best freind since he (jason) was 5. He has been there for Jason all the time.
These charaters are all 16 years old except for Jason who is 14.
It was a clear morning the sun was shining and those were the days Ali,Jason,Kayla,and Zak walked to school together. Zak was really on edge since he forgot to have his coffee."Oh my @#$% god!!" yelled Ali "You dont even need coffee do you see yourself!?!?" screamed Kayla "SHUT THE @#$% UP KAYLA!!!!!!!" "I'm sorry but yea sorry." "It's okay." now after that Zak pull out a pack of gum. Then he shoved a peice in his mouth really fast."Hey Zak."said Jason "yes?" "can i have a peice?" "yea" after that all of them had peices of gum and Zak was once again calm.As they walked into school a voice appeared out of nowear "Hey Zak...."said a girl who came up to him her name was Stacy she was in his 1st and 4th period classes.He knew she had a major crush on him to she was smart and pretty but Zak had his eyes set on another girl."Zak d..d..do you wanna go out with me?" "I am sorry but no." "Way to let her down easy." Jason said with his famous little grin.
Okay people please write what you thought about my story its only my 2nd 1 so far so help me out:D
Characters:
Ali- A girl with long blonde hair she is captain of her school's soccer team and is head cheerleader.
Jason: The smartest guy in his grade who skipped 2 grades he is also very good at soccer as well as baseball.
Kayla: Jason's ex girl freind and Ali's best freind. She has long brown hair she is also on the soccer team and cheerleading squad.
Zak: Jason's best freind since he (jason) was 5. He has been there for Jason all the time.
These charaters are all 16 years old except for Jason who is 14.
It was a clear morning the sun was shining and those were the days Ali,Jason,Kayla,and Zak walked to school together. Zak was really on edge since he forgot to have his coffee."Oh my @#$% god!!" yelled Ali "You dont even need coffee do you see yourself!?!?" screamed Kayla "SHUT THE @#$% UP KAYLA!!!!!!!" "I'm sorry but yea sorry." "It's okay." now after that Zak pull out a pack of gum. Then he shoved a peice in his mouth really fast."Hey Zak."said Jason "yes?" "can i have a peice?" "yea" after that all of them had peices of gum and Zak was once again calm.As they walked into school a voice appeared out of nowear "Hey Zak...."said a girl who came up to him her name was Stacy she was in his 1st and 4th period classes.He knew she had a major crush on him to she was smart and pretty but Zak had his eyes set on another girl."Zak d..d..do you wanna go out with me?" "I am sorry but no." "Way to let her down easy." Jason said with his famous little grin.
Okay people please write what you thought about my story its only my 2nd 1 so far so help me out:D