Sleepaway Camp Slave

[Annynamous]

Chapter 1

I am 13 male. It was summertime and I was going to sleepaway camp for the very first time. My mom dropped me off, and after we said goodbye I headed off to my cabin. At this camp activities went on all day but they are optional. It was an all boys camp to by the way. I walked into my cabin to find three large muscular guys that seemed like they knew each other. They looked much older and bigger than me and when they saw me they all grinned.

Chapter 2*

"Hi" one of them said "I'm Dan"
"I'm Nick" said another*
"and I'm Joe" the last one chimed in
"I'm Luke" I replied
"well Luke, every year we get put in the same cabin by request and the loser who ends up in the cabin with us is our slave" said dan. He seemed to be their leader.
"What? No!" I shouted
"Are you sure about that?"
"Yea!"
Then nick appeared behind me and gave me a huge wedgie and hung me by it over the bedpost on the bunkbead. I yelled in pain.
"Shut up!" said Dan "Joe go grab your 'lucky' sock!"
Joe brought over a yellowish sock and shoved it into my mouth. Lucky mustve meant he wore them every day! It tasted disgusting! Then Nick began punching me in the balls. It was the hardest I had ever gotten punched there in my life times ten. He punched again and again until tears rolled down my cheeks. Then they let me down. Joe pulled out the sock.*
"Fine!" I said "I'll be your slave!"
**

[Annynamous]

Comment on whether I should continue or not

[Robbo!]

Always continue!! Just because people don't reply doesn't mean they aren't reading. This is a well-written story with a lot of potential. I'm looking forward to see how it develops.

[catsanddogs]

u should continue this

[mijman]

It sounds like youv'e got a good basis for a story here, however you need to slow down the pace a bit, try putting more description in, instead of jumping the gun, for example why not elaborate on his journey to camp and describe the camp in more detail.
Idea is good tho.
keep writing;

[Mr. Green]

Nice a little fast but good start

[Annynamous]

thaNks for the feedback

Chapter 3
**
They laughed "good" Dan said. "Here are your rules"
He handed me an old piece of paper with the following typed on:

1. You will wear the same thing every day- t shirt, shorts, thong, socks
2. You will not leave the cabin (not even to use the bathroom) at any time without permission
3. You will do everything we tell you to without complaining
4. You will refer to us as 'master' and refer to yourself as 'this slave'
5. If you disobay any of these rules punishment will occur.

I tried to stay as calm as I could. How had I gotten myself into this? I felt cloth hi my face. A small sized pink thong was on my shoulder.*
"Put it on" said Dan
"Ok" I said*
I was spanked. Hard.
As I grabbed my butt in pain Dan said "you are to refer to us as master!"*
I changed into the thong trying to kepp as private about it as I could. It was way to small an the g-string gave me a wedgie just by wearing it.*
"Good. Now we have an initiation at the campfire tonight and you can go. Be sure to be back at our cabin immediately when it is finished." said Dan*
"Yes master."
I had a lot of fun at the initiation and met a kid two cabins down from me who seemed pretty cool. His name was matt. We all hung out, had smores, and sat around the campfire. I didn't even see my evil cabinmates. But they were ready for me when I got back and they had prepared a horrible night for me.

[j2o_orange2]

Please continue this has real potential!!

[maxim]

This could be a really good storie!
I would like to see more
Don't leave me hanging

[Annynamous]

Chapter 4

"Hello slave" they said when i entered the cabin.
"Hi masters"*
"You need to prove that you are loyal" said Dan*
"How shall this slave do that master?" I replied.
"Lick the bottoms of our shoes"
Eww I thought.
They sat down and stuck out their feet.
"Bottom to top on each shoe" said Dan*
I started out with Rick but it wasn't too bad. There was just some dirt and mud. It was the same for dan too. Then I saw Joe's shoes.*
All three of my masters laughed. "looks like you stepped in some dog crap" said Rick.
I looked up at them but they just raised their eyebrows. "Lick it!"
I did. It was the most disgusting thing I had ever done. I tried to spit and get the taste off my tounge but it wouldn't work. "On to your next assignment" said Dan. He*was holding a small trash bag and a pair of whighty tighties.*
"Put these on" he handed me the underwear
I didn't get why he wanted this because a thong was worse but I did as told. There was still a terrible taste on my tounge*
"Ok, now Joe grab the front and Rick grab the back."
They pulled up the front and back of my underwear open and Joe opened the bag to reaveal a multitude of half-eaten smores.*
Now I understood why Dan made me change underwear. Thongs couldn't hold anything in them. Dan poured the smores into my underwear. It felt gross. Some of them were still hot and burned my balls. Then they set up a front to back permanent wedgie, tied my feet and legs together, and threw me into my bunk. "Good night" Joe said with a laugh.

I've got some big ideas to make this story more interesting. If you have suggestions please post! I love getting comments!

[maxim]

WOW!. I want more I am horny reading this!

[evilmime13]

Great story
This is just starting but it is already one of my favorites
Please continue it
please

[Annynamous]

Chapter 5

It took me long time to fall asleep that night, giving me lots of time to think. I had to be here for a whole week whether I liked it or not and I defenitly did not like it. I needed to stop this torture but I had no clue how. If I refused to do what they told me they could pummel me into a pancake. I hoped they would let me have some time to have fun.... These thoughts slowly brought me to sleep but I was woken up by a stomp on my balls.
I opened my eyes to see a bare butt sitting on my face. It was Joe. He mustve weighed at least 180 pounds! He started farting and didn't stop until what seemed like an hour. The farts smelled horrible and he could send them out on demand!*
"Good morning" said Dan*
I groaned
"You may take a shower now" he said "but you may only use cold water."
"Yes master. May I go to the bathroom also?"
"Ok"
Yes I thought. I would get to wash off the smores and relieve my bladder. But it was not a happy bathroom trip, it ended up being the worst bathroom trip of my life.*

Sorry I always keep you guys hanging. Haha thanks for the good feedback.*More soon! Still open to suggestions!
Also, should matt (luke's friend) become a main character?

[Annynamous]

Chapter 6

I walked into the bathroom. It smelled pretty bad but at least it wasn't a porta potty. *I went in the shower and selected the cold setting. It was freezing but brought much reileif. Then I went to the bathroom and did a number 1 and 2. I began to walk off but Joe greeted me at the door.*
"Where do you think you're going slave?"
He pushed me over into the stall I had just gone in. Oh crap I had forgotten to flush! I thought. Dan shoved my face into the toilet, and the crap smeared all over my face. "Flush it Rick!" ordered Dan. Another gross experience. As he was pulling my face out of the toilet I heard a gasp. It was matt! "what's going on Luke?" he yelled.*
"You know him? Looks like we might have a second slave" said Dan.

I know it was a short chapter but the next one will be longer (obviously)! **

[maxim]

I would like longer chapters.
For the story to slow down some
This new kid but a weird yet fun twist on the story.

I like:
The way you write
the way you make the reader feel thanks:)

[Annynamous]

Just an FYI matt is the kid that Luke became friends with at the initiation.

[Annynamous]

Chapter 7

"What?" matt said
"Luke here is our slave. You will join him as a second slave" Dan replied
"And why would I agree to that?"
"Rick and Joe why don't you show him"
Matt was carried off out back behind the bathroom.*
"Wait!" I pleaded "Please let him go he doesn't have anything to do with this!"
"Well now he does. Plus, now you have a friend to suffer with" said Dan.*
I didn't know what to think. I guess I kind of was glad I wouldn't be alone... But matt didn't deserve this. Then again, neither did I.
"Also you just disobeyed multiple rules!" said Dan and he shoved my head back in the toilet. He also gave me a wedgie at the same time and I had my thong back on so it HURT! Then he took me out back where Joe was holding up matt by a wedgie and Rick was punching him.*
Dan pointed to the dumpster sitting next to where we were and said "throw them in" They threw matt and i in. Matt was shouting and cursing at them. I felt the dumpster begin to move. "Stop!" I whispered to matt but he didn't listen. Then all of the sudden we were rolling down a hill. Food scraps flew all over us as we were thrown around in the dumpster like popcorn. We finnaly stopped moving and matt an I laid there in pain. "What is wrong with them?" matt croaked.
"I don't know"

[Jellybones]

Im really liking this! I cant wait for more. Thanks for such frequent updates!

[cudles12323]

Im really liking this! I cant wait for more. Thanks for such frequent updates!

yea most authors suck at doing that

[elektro]

oohhh! this is a good story! add something where one of the guys shave you completely everywhere! and they use a shoestring or something and tie it around your balls to make a leash.

[Demon Thief]

This is different from a lot of things I've read. I hope to read more shortly. :D

[Annynamous]

No update today but I will give you another nice long one tomorrow. Glad you guys are enjoying it!

[maxim]

It's ok, I am glad you are going on with this story.

[Annynamous]

Chapter 8

When we finnaly regained our strength matt kicked the dumpster open. I screamed "NO!"
Our maters were standing outside the dumpster. "That isn't a very welcoming way to greet someone slave"
"You are the worst people alive!" I screamed "What the hell is wrong with you?!" I was losing it "Get AWAY!"*
"You just made a big mistake" said Dan.*
He was right. I had basiclly just commited suicide. They were going to kill us.
"Get up."*
We did.
"Both of you bend over and pull down your pants and underwear"
"Whats going on?" said matt
"You are going to be punished"*
"But matt didn't do anything!" I protested
"Well he will have to suffer from your mistake"
Then he began to whip us on our bare bottoms.*
"owww!"
"Shut up!"
After at least 10 lashes each he stopped. *
"Tie these around your balls" Dan handed us two shoestrings. We did, not wanting to be whipped again. When we were done he Gave each string a hard yank. We cringed.*
"These will be your leashes." said Dan*
Joe and Rick each took a string. They yanked us all the way back to our cabin. Then they pushed us down on my bunk.*
"Hmm what should we do with the two of you next?"

Hey everyone hope you're enjoying this story. I've got plans to put a huge twist in the story but you guys can choose when it happens. Should it come in the next chapter or should I wait a little while? I'm still taking other suggestions too. Thanks. *
*

[glasssbottle174]

this has been really really good. keep it up

[Annynamous]

Haha just realized that in the first chapter one of the guys was called Nick and I've been calling him Rick lol sorry bout that. I'll keep him as Rick now

[maxim]

Oooh, I like huge twists!
and suprsingly I like this story
suprising because I usually don't like blackmail
stories.. SO, Keep up the good work:)

[Annynamous]

Chapter 9

"I have an idea" said Rick*
They went over to the other side of the cabin and had a whispered conversation.*
Then they stopped and came back over to us.*
"Stand backs facing each other" said Dan.*
We did and he tied us together with a rope and pulled us by our 'leashes' behind the cabin.
Then Joe began to pour maple syrup all over us. It was all gross and sticky. Then they brought us over to a big mud pit and rolled us around in it. But the worst was yet to come *Lastly they walked us over to the horse farm that happened to be at the camp. I started to scream as they began to pull us toward the horses manure pile. That didn't stop them from throwing us into the pile.*
"Ewww" we shouted*
Our masters laughed "we'll be back in an hour or so"
After they left I whispered to matt "we need to find a way to stop this!"*
"I know but how?" matt replied "they're bigger and stronger than us"
"I don't know. I just don't know."

Chapter 10
When they came back to get us I thought our noses were going to fall off from the horrible stench. They brought us back to the cabin and fed us, but not letting us wash or untying us. "I have to go to the bathroom" I said
"Me too" said matt*
"go in your pants" said Dan "and that is an order"
We did adding to the grossness of our situation.*
"See you guys later" said Dan. "We are going to play football so have fun tyed up while were gone!" they all laughed
"I hate this!" matt shouted.*
"Wait a second" I said "we have to roll over to that bed"*
When we got over to the bunk matt said "what are you doing?"
I stuck my head under the bunk and used it to pull a magazine out from under the bunk. I grinned. "I have some great news" I pushed the porn magazine over where Matt could see it.*

Thanks for the comments!

[maxim]

I like it.
Although, It seems like you are starting to rushg things
Ooh, Porn >.<

[Annynamous]

New post tomorrow. Btw is this good singing? http://songcovers5000.blogspot.com/2010/03/drops-of-jupiter.html

[Robbo!]

New post tomorrow. Btw is this good singing? http://songcovers5000.blogspot.com/2010/03/drops-of-jupiter.html
Let's just say you'd be better off covering Bob Dylan. Or using an auto tuner.

In other news, 100th post!

[Annynamous]

I will post new chapter for every 4 comments

[Robbo!]

Don't do that to us!!! One of the best things about this story is that it was posted really quickly!

[Noquestions]

I don't get why you would do that, force people to comment, just write for enjoying it, or at least, look how many views your thread is getting, are you expecting people to post for every view they do or something? Seems rather silly to hold people to ransom, and just alienate people who enjoyed your writing, since you seem to be doing it just for the attention it may bring.

Just my 2c, an yes, I realise irony that I am giving you one of your comments. But readers have the power, they can not comment, and then you can either give up on your story, and enjoyment you should get writing, or back down, and be satisfied with a decent thread view count, and a fair few comments.

[maxim]

It's been four comments! >.<

[Hunanic]

Keep Going, btw you got maxims last post :(

[Annynamous]

Everyone, I have decided that I have better things to do than write stories on getdare so I will no longer be posting.
However, this story is not over. I will pick a new person to continue it for me. If you are intrested pm me and I'll pick my favorite. I will make my decision on April 10th!

[cudles12323]

Everyone, I have decided that I have better things to do than write stories on getdare so I will no longer be posting.
However, this story is not over. I will pick a new person to continue it for me. If you are intrested pm me and I'll pick my favorite. I will make my decision on April 10th!

awwww!!!! u r so good!

[brycer11748]

Pm him please i like this story but am too scared to continue it myself!!!!

[cudles12323]

Pm him please i like this story but am too scared to continue it myself!!!!

same here! idk how!

[Hawkwarrior]

Hey I will continue it, I am an author, well almost and I would love to do it