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tdawg
01-21-2010, 07:42 PM
I will redue this post tomorrow my apologies
Robbo!
01-21-2010, 07:59 PM
Well that was lame and unsatisfying. Here's some advice: Don't beg for posts. This post was far too short and too uninteresting to warrant a reply. You need a better, longer hook. And this is more than obviously the work of a very unskilled writer.
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